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Rally-the-Cheetah — Just me and my Shadow...Pg2
Published: 2006-08-28 07:26:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 12326; Favourites: 171; Downloads: 17
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Well after so many liked the first page I just had to continue this thing
. Sadly I'm not all to happy with some of the art on this page... Like the villian's arm in the second to last panel is a tad longer than the other. Oh well, at least it's done. Note to self, action lines are a PAIN. They look cool but golly if they don't take a while to get right. Anyhow hope you all enjoy. I think I'll change the category for this later... DA's sections don't seem to be written very clearly at the moment so I'm a bit confused as to where this goes 
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Comments: 22
I've done fan comics with Mephiles, and I just had to give him a mouth, too! It's harder to show facial expressions and emotions without one(plus I like giving him a devious grin!)
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He doesn't have a nose normally either but this isn't exactly the Mephiles from the games... Well he is but he isn't. Long story but I don't want to give away too many spoilers.
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Okay. Well.. We gonna see why ^^
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way cool page man i really want to ask you a fover i also have a comic on shadow and sonic and i was wondering if you can fix and write th wrods rigth and put the black box around it but well i have let you see it fist go see
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ooooh i love this page XD gooo shadow XD 
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OMG! OMG! Kick his ass Shadow! I hate you Mephilles! I had you with a passion! (I still can't get an S ranking on Shadow's first fight with Mephilles in the game. I always lose my coins or I just take too long to beat him. It sucks!) Anyway... I thought you did a great job on this page. I'm just a little confused if the bottom right panel is Shadow or Mephilles. Otherwise, I see nothing wrong. I think it's perfecto!^_^
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XD Shadow's in a bad mood. XD
Awesome fancomic so far. Mephiles looks awesome. *fav*
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absolutely LOVE how you fraw the chaos spear forming around SHad's hand 
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"And sorry if the comic "Just me and my Shadow seems a lot like your "Angel of Darkness" I actually started it before you posted your first page but didn't complete it till after . To be truthful I felt a bit awkward posting it up after your comic page just because I feared it would make me look like a copy cat. Still I had worked on it for several hours so decided I'd put it up anyways. So... Yeah... sorry if it seems like I stole your idea but I really wanted to work on a fighting scene and the Next Gen story was WIDE open to interpretation."
Naaaaaaah! Don't think like that even for a second! 
The speed lines were no exceptions, they were drawn with accuracy and great attention to detail.
The expressions and dialouge suited very well on Shadow and Mephiles! You really should keep it going! XXXD But then again it's only if you have the time and motivation no? 
Anyway keep up the amazing work! I'm going to hop off to your other comic which really touched my heart. *thumbs up* 
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Thanks! Just wait till you see what I have in store for Shadow and Mephiles next
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I read the title and expected this to be a clara coon submission. WTF.
nice tho
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Nice One Jen, the darkness in the BG really helps set the mood.
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Excellent Job Rally! It is awesomly drawn! *if I can even spell....*
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love the way you drew it. it looks so awesome!
the anticipation...
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