NeonXenomorph [2009-03-21 03:15:04 +0000 UTC]
Heh I agree with Immy. Pity the rest was lost. This is good. The little I know about Callie, it's easy to see why she'd do that though.
Really dark tone too even with this little bit, kudos on it.
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ImagenAshyun [2006-01-22 08:18:01 +0000 UTC]
Very description, the tone quite eerie and somewhat chilling. It's a shame that the majority of the short story is lost, as it would be nice to read the rest
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