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Sandytreefrog [2014-11-03 03:01:11 +0000 UTC]
He was really creepy! Β What if you drew a picture of the scene where Yakko punches him? I would love to see a picture of that! Β
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Rannva In reply to Timedrakess [2011-01-09 22:25:17 +0000 UTC]
You just have to read to find out, I don't want to spoil. ^^ Or you can PM if you really want to know what happens so I won't spoil for anyone else.
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Kmz13112 [2010-10-08 19:56:52 +0000 UTC]
You should do one with Yakko punching Ocho, that was my favorite part!
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Rannva In reply to Kmz13112 [2011-01-09 22:25:42 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I did a few attempts, haven't managed yet though
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Kmz13112 In reply to Rannva [2011-01-10 00:19:25 +0000 UTC]
oh, that's too bad
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AllyCatAussie [2010-07-03 19:01:42 +0000 UTC]
Oh this scene had me wanting to punch that collie in the muzzle!
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MoochiinLove [2010-06-13 04:20:09 +0000 UTC]
I gotta say, this last chapter has to be my favorite and you got that scene dead on! I was a bit scared for Dot, especially when Ocho started calling her naughty and saying he wanted 'different' pictures of her. Real relieve when Yakko and Bugs came to the rescue!
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FanOfVirginiaTV [2010-06-08 19:39:42 +0000 UTC]
Been following the story and loved the plot and the artwork.
Favorite part of the chapter was Yakko sending Ocho on a "one-way ticket" to the floor.
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Rannva In reply to Karma-and-pencil [2010-03-22 11:45:37 +0000 UTC]
Thanks ^^ It's one of my favourite fanfictions, I often hops around reading some chapters here and there when I'm bored
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Karma-and-pencil In reply to Rannva [2010-03-22 12:37:54 +0000 UTC]
I know, such an amazing story, I might draw some scenes myself later..
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DragonKnight92 [2010-03-20 21:16:53 +0000 UTC]
Is this from a fan fic? If it is, can you tell me where I can find it? It looks really interesting.
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Rannva In reply to DragonKnight92 [2010-03-21 08:01:43 +0000 UTC]
Family, by "TheMiddleWarnerSibling" in the Animaniacs section on ff.net
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DragonKnight92 In reply to Rannva [2010-03-21 12:09:33 +0000 UTC]
Ah thats good because I recently discovered that story, I just didn't know which story this scene was from. Thanks for your help,
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Jose-Ramiro [2010-03-01 05:31:05 +0000 UTC]
Oh, yeah, I remember this scene. What a creep.
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Lily-Pond-Maiden [2010-02-28 17:49:14 +0000 UTC]
Creeper!! He was such a creeper! It was such a relief when Yakko decked him!!
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Rannva In reply to Lily-Pond-Maiden [2010-03-05 09:31:23 +0000 UTC]
Creep creppily-creep-creep ^^
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theresamooseloose [2010-02-27 20:11:46 +0000 UTC]
Yakko totally owned him! You've done a good job on Ocho, still hansome if slightly acne ridden X3 Poor Dot, she doesn't like her ears being toutched
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Rannva In reply to theresamooseloose [2010-03-05 09:32:43 +0000 UTC]
Especially not from someone she just met that was supposed to be 8, not 16.
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MightyMorphinPower4 [2010-02-27 16:13:12 +0000 UTC]
Exllcent work here yeah Ouch creepted me out before we even saw him , through he a lot different then what I expected however as the old saying goes apperances can be decvied. It a good thing Yakko tries to keep an eye on her
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Rannva In reply to MightyMorphinPower4 [2010-02-27 17:09:24 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, it said in the chapter that under the acne, he was actually quite good looking, so I went for that, just probably didn't put up enough acne. XD It's always someone that you know people will say
"I would never think something like that about him, he was so sweet as a child... Are you sure it was him? Or maybe you just missunderstood what he meant?"
Dot would have been in soooooo much trouble if she had managed to get Bugs and Yakko to be further away. Goodbye innocence, and sanity. I had more sense than her in that age, our parents always warned us about the pedophile in the forrest that was between me and my classmates. I always forgot the word, but I always knew that if I met an adult that wanted to give me a bunny or candy, he probably just wanted to rape me.
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Buneii [2010-02-27 16:10:20 +0000 UTC]
OMG lol yeah! Thats the last chapter until theirs a new one xD
Seriously, the freakin' teen freaked me out too. Before he started talking I already knew the outcome: Pedophile; Yakko coming to the rescue, bugs on board |D...
and Dot who doesnt know 'that' type of people.
Anyways, I dont think their was any outfits described either o__o
but this is awsome! Dot lookes confused and irritated, and Ocho looks......just plain pedo |D
Awsome job!
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Buneii In reply to Rannva [2010-02-27 17:19:55 +0000 UTC]
Total pain in the ass.
omg yeah xD
When Yakko punched the poor-yet-well deserved collie on the nose, I laughed abit when he went 'POW! right in the kisser!' I was like wtf?? xDDD
Besides, I doubt Dots gonna do another Mag. Ad after her grounding -w-;
Your welcome |D
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