rarityandastrid2017 [2019-07-10 06:11:29 +0000 UTC]
man, my bitch ass was gonna delete everything, but I'm too lazy to do that bull.
so instead, imma critique on my ass art from two years ago.
1. boi, wtf's up with the hair, first of all. I think I was tryna make Rarity's mane contain split ends, but I failed miserably. they're in such awkward places, bruh. and for fuck's sake, would you color out the eyes that are behind the hair? I know you wanna show off your amateur skills with doing eyes, but it's so infuriating to look at. I used to be okay with this, but now it's a pet peeve, especially so since I have this weird need to touch every side and corner of my surroundings (i've always called it "the black dot" ever since I was little.) and look at the physics of the girls' hairs in the background. like wtf's goin on with that rat's nest on Adagio's skull? why do Aria's bangs look like really bushy eyebrows? why is Sonata's ponytail going over the front of her face when it's not her canon design? and wtf kind of hairstyles are Sunset Shimmer, Trixie and Starlight glimmer wearing? they look like exercise video bitches from the '80s. and back to the 'hair over the eye, yet the eye still being visible' rant, why is Trixie's eye visible over Sunset's hair?? it's like her eye ain't even in her skull and likes to float around in its surroundings. fuckin hell. and why are Starlight and Adagio's manes and Rarity's tail in motion like there's fuckin wind? where are they, anyway? they look like they're in that place where Squidward was with all of the "alones" were in different fonts. that bitch looked like a microsoft paint project a child put together to look at all of the pretty fonts. fuck
2. context??? please?? wtf's goin on here? no back story, no explanation, nothing. just a trash af picture, leaving the viewers hell clueless as to wtf's going on. i mean, if you wanna make up your own story as to what happened, that's great. go ahead, get wild and take your shirt off and whatever, but it would still be appreciated if there was a little idea, at least. despite me making this shit, i have absolutely no idea what to make of this. all I can tell is that Rarity was somehow converted from good to evil, and now she's gonna start hanging out with all the other thoties of the show. yeah, sure, jan. i wanna know how it happened, why it happened, and what's gonna happen next. i just don't fookin understand, bruh
3. those s c a r s. the proportions of Rarity's scars give me aids. what the hell, man.
4. positions of the characters. why is Rarity's fat ass blocking the other girls? I low key feel like that's being a lil disrespectful to the creator of the bases for the 5 thoties in the very background, considering the creator for the base of those 5 and the one for Rarity aren't the same artist.
5. i see that "I'll keep looking" in the description. obviously you looked, since that message is still there 2 years later. why the hell don't I just copy the bases when I first select them?? i would find the base now, but it's obviously not gonna matter. so bull
alright, bruh, i'm gone
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