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Published: 2012-11-10 01:59:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 2508; Favourites: 56; Downloads: 0
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This is another random page of a new short comic that I made some days ago...I use: ink and nibs, brush pen and traditional screentones (deleter an maybe animate, I don't remember :/ )
I really hate the last scene xDDD is a shit... But I made so fast because I had to send to a contest.
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Good. Nice, strong lines and clear panels. Next time try a more dynamic shots, not just squares and rectangles - rhombus, triangles, etc.
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Thanks for comment ! and yes I need draw more dynamic shots, but it's not neccesary change the format of the panel (I work with rectangles because is my 'touche' xD like the panoramics of a movie)
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there is no need for words in this pic... because it is just as terrifying without them.
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I dig the shading and the simple textures that give it some weight, it feels professional in it's presentation.
I agree that the last panel doesn't work. She's to stiff to convey the momentum of her high-tailing it out of there. You need to exaggerate her arms and legs and have her bend forward more to drive home the forward motion. Maybe look at some pictures of track runners or something and try to pick out what about there pose showcases the momentum.
You have nice clean lines and a awesome shading style that works well, working on your gestures should help a lot. Never underestimate the power of gestures. 
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Thanks you so much for your critique, I really appreciate it!
I totally agree with it, the last panel sucks and I would like to repeat again @_@ (but draw the movement is difficult for me, I've always drawn things static, need practice it >_>)
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Cool. I can't say i'm great at conveying motion either but I've really been pushing my gesture and anatomy skills lately and boy, it really helps. If you find something you can't seem to get right, just look up some reference and do some quick studies. It's a routine I'm just starting to see the importance and payoff of.
Keep on rocking! \m/
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The references are a salvation ! (I use my BJD (ball jointed doll) sometimes for difficult poses and www.posemaniacs.com to practice
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Nice reference site. I'll definitely be checking that out!
I should use those BJD more often, thanks for reminding me. I have two but completely forgot about them.
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me too (have two bjd) and I also often forgot them @_@ but are so useful ~
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I've checked the site out some more and it's just awesome! Being able to rotate and cycle through animations should prove to be invaluable. Thanks for sharing that. Now i'm even more motivated to memorize all those muscles. Time to use those bjd for some creative posing~
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I'm glad that you find the site useful! :>
And thanks you so much for the watch, of course watch you too (you have a beautiful digital art 
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Thanks!
It's always a pleasure to talk with other artists and help each other out.
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Fantastic job on the shading, I would love to see this as an actual story. I actually think the last panel is one of the best
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Thanks you so much for your comment and watch !
do you like the last panel? I do not like it, I think I came out pretty bad but some people tell me that is a good panel, so thanks !
I'm working in a webcomic right now : )
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I think that it gives the idea of motion, so if it is not up to snuff in your eyes, it might actually add to the effect
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Thanks ! (but I'm a woman xD)
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Nice page. Nice and clean layout and great inks
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You did excellent job conveying emotion and the atmosphere in this comic without words. The second panel is my favourite.
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Thanks
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i love everything about this comic the lining shades boxes that you made the whole works thats how i see it in a comic page that you made great job!!
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Thanks you so much ! I'm so glad that you like it >_<)//
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Cool monsters, although they look kind of scary. The left bottom panel is really nice and detailed too.
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The monster i my fav part of this short comic xD
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The illustration in each pannel is really well done. I hope you continue this comic, it looks like it'll turn out to be a great piece.
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It's a short comic only of 4-5 pages (I'll do the last page soon and submit the complete comic here :>).
Thanks for comment !
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I really really love the shading in this! The girl is beautiful btw haha. You have talent^^
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The shades, oh my gosh the shades. PRO LEVEL OVER 9000 
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hahaha thanks you so much
I'm very glad that you like my comic page ~~
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you're more than welcome
I'm doubtful to ask this, but if you have time, please check my gallery, I'd be most honored
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oh. very nice. now this seems like my kind of comic
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