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rattyrayvn — The First Flight
Published: 2007-11-28 08:31:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 185; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 4
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Description Ascent on burning wings beyond the boundless plain of sky;
The chains of Earth are broken by ambition's call to fly.
Sea and shore receding to be swallowed by the night
As far away, new guides appear, temptations drawn in light.

The spirit of adventure lures us out
with promises of more to call our own;
it shows us things we cannot understand
until, too late, we see we are alone.

Witnesses to the infinite
are forever sworn to silence

this was not meant for my eyes


i am too far from home



and
the point of no return
is
all around
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Comments: 4

mistsofavalon4ever [2008-04-29 02:48:05 +0000 UTC]

intense!
Good rhyming!

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rattyrayvn In reply to mistsofavalon4ever [2008-04-29 07:58:10 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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ans-pencil [2007-11-28 08:36:39 +0000 UTC]

b-e-a-u-t-i-f-u-l
tear*
reely reeely nice use of words
perfectly chosen words in the perfect order to create your image

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rattyrayvn In reply to ans-pencil [2007-11-28 09:24:41 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for your comment

*hypnotised by your avatar*

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