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Ravenatawritingdesk — Contradiction
Published: 2011-05-21 16:05:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 2070; Favourites: 97; Downloads: 47
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Because I only smile when I'm cryingI'm only honest when I lie
And I can't do anything well anymore
But this is me, and I'm alright.
Yes, this is me, and I'm still breathing.
This is me, and I'm still here.
And if you thought your words could change me,
This is me, and I don't care.
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My normal style is, as quoted by a friend of mine, "I love unicorns and rainbows"
I think he means that it's really transparent.
I like this one.
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Transparent? Lemme read through some of your stuff- you talk like a writer. xD
(And thank you. 
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Well done for something short...and the sentiments are beautifully put.
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Nice poem. check mine out frozist.deviantart.com/art/Worlds-nor-Walls-209814255
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this is how I've been feeling for the past 4 weeks...
but I love the flow of this poem and the amount of earnest apathy you can feel out of such a small amount of words, very well written
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the world hasnt ended. at least as far as i can tell. maybe it was just a hoax to get attention to those radio things.maybe its the judgement of the president. he probably saved everyone in an epic battle with abn alien overlord! (not obama. a REPUBLICAN prez, from da futa) sorry for the bad spelling. i was having voughing fiits while writing this. dman allergies.
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WOAHWAIT. Perhaps it has, and we exist in an imaginary alternate universe our subconscious minds are presenting us because we fear what comes afterwards. OR MAYBE. MAYBE. UH. We are dead, and this is Heaven/Hell. That's some deep shit right there.
(Hm, allergies or a secret alien plot? THEY MUST BE THE ONES PREVENTING THE RAPTURE [ten bucks says Harold Camping will use that excuse somewhere in his apology speech]. I /knew/ they were the ones who faked the moon landing.)
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hmmmm. maybe ur right. MAYBE THIS IS ALL A LIE! THIS IS THE MATRIX AND WE ARE BEING HARVESTED FOR ENERGY BY ROBOTS OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG! *fax machine noises* program eliminated
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That is so cool! I wrote something like that once, but it wasn't as good as yours.
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hhehe where all still alive XD good luck with studying ^^
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I'm not going to study anyway, am I? xD
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Woo! Blowing work off! 
But otherwise, very well written, very nice poem.
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Haha, that would be the main cause of me hanging out on deviantart. Avoiding actual homework. xD
And thank you.
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Me too.
And absolutely.
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Thank you so much.
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slant rhymes are the best. xD I hope the world ends. That would mean no math exam. -.-
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I know, right? A zombie apocalypse would /totally/ be worth skipping my geometry final.
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Aww, thank you.
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