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Published: 2005-02-11 22:48:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 266; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 9
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Description This picture makes up for all it's smudges and other crap in the back story.

The Charry is Lei-Roi, a former-street rat who managed to buy himself an apartment, and then he takes over the world with two girls, all of which are fifteen or so.

I was sitting in my Global Studies class, (there was a sub) and I finished my work in record time. Naturally, I started doodling, and the rest of the story will take place in text. Ed is the freind of mine on my left side, and Veilius is on da right. Yoink! Is the sound effect for something getting stolen, in this case, my note book.

R: *doodle*
V: Hey, the eyes are on his forehead!
Ed: And the chin is too big!
R: I know, I know...
V: *Yoink!*
R: Mif!
V: *after drawing, hands it back*
R: *starts doodling again*
Ed: His chest is too big! *yoink!*
R: Hey!
Ed: *hands it back* The waist should be here, and the legs are here. *draws shapes for the body parts*
R: he's wearing boxors!
Ed: No he's not! It's-*giggles*
R: *goes back to doodling*
Ed: His pant's don't have a zipper! how's he supposed to put them on?
R: Strechy waistline?
Ed: Here. *hands it back*
V: his hands are too small, and his arms are too short! *yoink*
R: Meanie! that was my drawing!
V: We know, we're just helping you! *hands it back*
Ed: *yoink!*
R: I didn't even get to pick up my pencil on that one....
Ed: He still can't put on his pants!
R: *laughing too hard to comment*
Ed: There, since he's an anime character, he needs speed lines! *hands it back*
R: *adds 'WTF?' at the top* I got dibbs on the pants, and he's supposed to have long hair!
Ed: Wait! *Yoink!*
R: I was drawing! *Tries to take it back*
Ed: *stabs*
R: OW! *Goes back to spot*
Ed: there. *hands it back*
V: His clothes are too neat, he need wrinkles! *reaches over to draw them*
Ed: Yeah! *Draws them too*
R: *Sigh*
Ed: He needs bigger eyebrows. *Yoink!*
R: You're gonna give him hamster brows?
Ed: No! *hands it back*
V: The hands are still messed up! *Yoink!*
Ed: Yeah, the hands should be as big as the face.
V: *hands it back*
R: Why did you make his sleeves all rippy?
V: 'Cause he's a street urchin.
R: Well, not really, he got himself an apartment.
V: Oh. *Yoink!*
R: Can I finish his pants yet?
V: Now you can. *hands it back*
R: *finishes his pants*
**Bell Rings**
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Comments: 18

Ketti [2005-02-24 03:57:55 +0000 UTC]

Very proportional... and I can see why. Lovely teamwork. /^.~\

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RavenC In reply to Ketti [2005-02-25 14:03:20 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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countchunko [2005-02-20 15:24:07 +0000 UTC]

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His pocketsare too small. *YOINK*

yes, this is real fun to look at, 'cus i can see a bit of style differences in the different perts of the body.

BTW: do you have a character based on me?

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RavenC In reply to countchunko [2005-02-25 14:04:32 +0000 UTC]

Um.........


HIS POCKETS ARE NOT TO SMALL, DAMNIT!

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BenSpector [2005-02-12 19:18:55 +0000 UTC]

Does he get to blow up the bad guys with kuh-razy magic powers or kuh-razy Weapons of Mad Destruction?

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RavenC In reply to BenSpector [2005-02-13 16:27:59 +0000 UTC]

No, he's got status inducing spells.

Not to mention kick ass 'Grrr' personality, and sarcastic, pessimistic comments.

He's the pissy boy of the group.

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BenSpector In reply to RavenC [2005-02-13 18:23:42 +0000 UTC]

What?! Status-inducing spells?! I mean, think about it: Let's say he's fighting a thirty-foot-tall mechanical behemoth. What good is poison or paralysis gonna do against that? Even if blindness or sleep or Seasonally Affected Depression somehow were able to incapacitate a monster like that, odds are it would just fall on him then!

Seriously, he'd be a much more effective fighter if he could turn the bad guys inside out or something. Being blown up generally does more to make one lose a battle than being Berserk'd by a grumpy kid.

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RavenC In reply to BenSpector [2005-02-15 13:01:28 +0000 UTC]

That's why he's got the two girls with him. One uses the five chinese elements, and the other is a Seer, and she can do mind control.

Damn I over power girls. ^^v

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BenSpector In reply to RavenC [2005-02-15 22:38:56 +0000 UTC]

Yes. Yes you do. And while I support feminism*, I really think that their powers should be more balanced. Like, give the guy a stolen government phaseshift armor prototype so he can walk through walls and avoid physical assaults or something. That would be cool. But if he's really just a bard, get ready to see him get the snot beaten out of him a LOT.

Also, I'd limit the elementalist girl to one or two elements. I think elemental specialists are cooler than people who are always like "I have a spell for that! Watch me drown/shock/melt/freeze/encase in metal/encase in wood/blow away/teleport into another dimension/set off a fission reaction on the face of/summon sweaty ex-convicts to molest/pin against the floor/explode the guts of that monster! Magicum wordulus! [insert fitting sound effect]" And also there need to be specific, named antagonists, not just dumb guards/soldiers. One of whom helps or joins the heroes later in the story after realizing the error of their ways.

*And what's not to support? Women, though many of the ones I know are slightly/completely neurotic, are 50% responsible for the continued existence of the human race. Therefore women should get the same percentage of rights as men (also 50%. The remaining rights are distributed between the Animal, Plant, Fungus, Eubacteria, Archaebacteria and Protist Kingdoms. And lawyers.)

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RavenC In reply to BenSpector [2005-02-18 13:01:45 +0000 UTC]

He's NOT a BARD!

Don't listen to my sister. She never read it...

Lei-Roi: *glares*

There are antagonists, They build an army, and one of the characters are based offa you.

And you over estimate the elemental magic. She can do extremly limited things. Like, calling up a wind sheild that only blocks things like pen caps and paper, and the metal thing can only let her bend really soft metals.

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BenSpector In reply to RavenC [2005-02-18 20:23:57 +0000 UTC]

Well, it can be seen from whence my overestimation stemmed. (You: Damn I over power girls. ^^v) But then, how the crap are a not bard, weak elementalist and psychic going to bust a cap in the collective ass of an entire army of antagonists?

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RavenC In reply to BenSpector [2005-02-19 19:37:55 +0000 UTC]

There's only one squad that's antagonists.

The rest you really don't see much of.

Jcang-Nan (the psychic) uses mild mind control, (she just add a little motivation) to a few hundred or so mages and they go beat up an army, (Which is small, seeing how little of the population is left) and destroying the soul out of the dictator.

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BenSpector In reply to RavenC [2005-02-28 02:37:18 +0000 UTC]

Then they use their combined magical powers to restore the Earth into an Eden-like, near-humanless paradise?

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RavenC In reply to BenSpector [2005-02-28 23:26:27 +0000 UTC]

Ah, no.

I'm trying to make this somewhat realistic.

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snowhart In reply to BenSpector [2005-02-15 12:49:43 +0000 UTC]

But everybody likes bards!

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RavenC In reply to snowhart [2005-02-15 13:00:26 +0000 UTC]

Yuki, don't butt into my arguments!

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TheImmortalHunter [2005-02-12 02:44:49 +0000 UTC]

Hey. I remember. This is the guy from that story you're writing. Yay. I get to be the energy eating... dude...thing.

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RavenC In reply to TheImmortalHunter [2005-02-13 16:29:04 +0000 UTC]

Yes. I even spelled your name right now.

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