Comments: 7
UnholySin [2006-09-27 05:41:35 +0000 UTC]
I like it.
Very visual, but in it's unparticular rythme
It has a beat of it's own.
+ + +
The beat of memories.
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RavenDeadMan In reply to UnholySin [2006-09-27 20:45:27 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad you liked it. It really isn't a memory though, unless it's one I've supressed.
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UnholySin In reply to RavenDeadMan [2006-09-27 23:08:57 +0000 UTC]
Perhaps....there's only one way to find out....
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RecordKeeper [2006-09-09 19:51:14 +0000 UTC]
(these are the ideas
that flow from your soul-stream,
these are your life-truths...)
I like the idea of the 2nd to last paragraph.
RK.
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RecordKeeper In reply to RecordKeeper [2006-09-09 19:52:54 +0000 UTC]
ignore that,
I meant it for another poem.
(I'm not good with computers)
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InnoTenshi In reply to RavenDeadMan [2006-12-14 12:54:57 +0000 UTC]
( And yet I'm sure she meant to somehow - she was reading it, anyway. ^^ )
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