Comments: 14
IndiscriminateBullet [2005-02-10 15:01:22 +0000 UTC]
Aagh crazy speak! What are you saying?
It makes me upset.
But! Is this like, a personal story? Because it sounds real somehow. I like it, it gave me a very vivid picture of what was happening
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IndiscriminateBullet In reply to ravenvalentine [2005-02-11 05:06:46 +0000 UTC]
Oh, alright. Dark, aggravated thoughts festering within a mind held captive by the foul gloom of boredom!
Yeah. I've had a few of those
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slap-happy [2005-01-24 10:31:22 +0000 UTC]
ang lalim mo...i like that.^_^
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DanielRadcliffeLover [2005-01-23 17:13:48 +0000 UTC]
AW! i think that that's cute!!!!! Sad but happy at the end.....I like it
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ens1011 [2005-01-23 15:37:42 +0000 UTC]
i like the way you bought in the angelic figure from a sad scene, and the words said were comforting and it shows
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ravenvalentine In reply to ens1011 [2005-01-24 01:04:49 +0000 UTC]
thanks!!!
but i think the comment got cut off?
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ryne [2005-01-23 14:46:39 +0000 UTC]
it seems rather open-ended... what the narrator do afterwards?
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ravenvalentine In reply to ryne [2005-01-24 01:03:29 +0000 UTC]
hmmm, its actually a side story....
but, i was just pretty bored and sleepy thats why i left it hanging there...
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