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Published: 2005-01-23 14:26:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 215; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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Description Here I am again, in the depths of my own mind which was the darkness I came to love. You threw me again into its confines. But I'm happy again that this dark cold place saved me from many troubles, and numbed the pain, unlike you who was the source of it.

How can you do this to me again?

I sat here in the cold, letting the pain go away from my heart. I'm tired of listening to your nonsense rants about me. I've sacrificed more than just my feelings for the sake of you. You took a part of me away, you prevented me from being what I wanted to be, you took away my happiness, my beloved, and you forced me into something I wasn't.

Shame on you.

I lay down on he cold floor, tears slowly pouring down on my cheeks. But, where did they come from? From me? Or, from the depths of my heart? I didn't know, but as the tears flowed, it relieved me of the pain you gave me. The pain of two years slowly engulfed me in its prickly embrace, slowly tormenting me with its mocking smiles, raping my thoughts.

I don't deserve this at all.

Looking up, I saw a single dot of light, and I saw a figure drift down from that speck of light. He seemed so familiar, with his slanted eyes and his smile. The sight of him made me smile, and the pain went away slowly. He held me again in his arms, as if nothing had happened to us.

"You'll be safe here in my arms, my princess... always."
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Comments: 14

IndiscriminateBullet [2005-02-10 15:01:22 +0000 UTC]

Aagh crazy speak! What are you saying?

It makes me upset.

But! Is this like, a personal story? Because it sounds real somehow. I like it, it gave me a very vivid picture of what was happening

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ravenvalentine In reply to IndiscriminateBullet [2005-02-11 04:26:55 +0000 UTC]

huh?

yeah, a personal story. did it when i was quite bpred.

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IndiscriminateBullet In reply to ravenvalentine [2005-02-11 05:06:46 +0000 UTC]

Oh, alright. Dark, aggravated thoughts festering within a mind held captive by the foul gloom of boredom!

Yeah. I've had a few of those

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ravenvalentine In reply to IndiscriminateBullet [2005-02-11 05:22:59 +0000 UTC]

ahhhhh

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IndiscriminateBullet In reply to ravenvalentine [2005-02-11 06:04:13 +0000 UTC]

Lethargy sucks.

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slap-happy [2005-01-24 10:31:22 +0000 UTC]

ang lalim mo...i like that.^_^

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ravenvalentine In reply to slap-happy [2005-01-24 10:35:46 +0000 UTC]

hehe, ty po

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DanielRadcliffeLover [2005-01-23 17:13:48 +0000 UTC]

AW! i think that that's cute!!!!! Sad but happy at the end.....I like it

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ravenvalentine In reply to DanielRadcliffeLover [2005-01-24 01:01:59 +0000 UTC]

aww really?
thankshies

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DanielRadcliffeLover In reply to ravenvalentine [2005-01-24 18:30:30 +0000 UTC]

Yes really..........Your welcomeses

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ens1011 [2005-01-23 15:37:42 +0000 UTC]

i like the way you bought in the angelic figure from a sad scene, and the words said were comforting and it shows

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ravenvalentine In reply to ens1011 [2005-01-24 01:04:49 +0000 UTC]

thanks!!!
but i think the comment got cut off?

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ryne [2005-01-23 14:46:39 +0000 UTC]

it seems rather open-ended... what the narrator do afterwards?

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ravenvalentine In reply to ryne [2005-01-24 01:03:29 +0000 UTC]

hmmm, its actually a side story....

but, i was just pretty bored and sleepy thats why i left it hanging there...

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