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RawPoetry — I will peck your face off

Published: 2017-11-29 07:55:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 349; Favourites: 55; Downloads: 0
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Description I just started taking a photography class that I am so excited about! I think it's going to give me the knowledge and motivation to improve my landscapes that I've been wanting for so long. 
Buuut it's a firehose of information and I'm taking it slow to absorb all of it as effectively as possible. Sharing some silly photos of daily life in the meantime. 

Here are 2 of my 4 chickens. I can't tell them apart, so they are all collectively called Henrietta. Instead of gingerly taking the feed from my hand like when they were chicks, she went right through it and pecked the crap out of my hand. Jerk. But I haven't had to buy eggs in a long time, so they're worth it  
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Comments: 9

abbyhdsn [2018-01-17 04:43:52 +0000 UTC]

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The angle and focus of this image truly allows the viewer to feel as though they are feeding Henrietta themselves. Your work always captures a unique perspective and this is a wonderful example of that.
Additionally, the contrast between the chickens, the ground, and the darkened edges of the image combined with your arm pointing to the chicken as you feed her is an amazing use of artistic qualities to create a focal point. Henrietta is dark in comparison with most of the image and your arm allows for a convenient line of focus as the eye travels from Henrietta, to your hand, up your arm, and back.
The focus of the image is very well done as well, allowing us to see so much detail of Henrietta's feathers and beak as she stared you down for her food.
This image invokes memories of watching the Wizard of Oz as a child, and I think it's awesome that your work can bring about such memories because connections like these keep people coming back to view more of your gorgeous work.
You did a lovely job on this photo.

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RawPoetry In reply to abbyhdsn [2018-01-19 23:31:31 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much for the wonderful critique, I am so glad you like my photo! I am glad that you feel I succeeded in making her a strong focal point - she only cooperated for a few seconds, I was lucky to get her attention long enough to get a photo I really enjoyed reading your critique, thanks again for writing it!

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abbyhdsn In reply to RawPoetry [2018-01-20 05:41:21 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome! And thank you!!
Your critiques were the first I was confident enough to write and I'm so glad I did. I'm really happy that you enjoyed reading them and that you like them so much. When I have some more free time, I'm sure I'll be back to leave more Your pieces are very fun to discuss.

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KelpGull [2017-12-01 03:56:16 +0000 UTC]

This is my favorite picture ever. Foreground Henrietta is so sassy.

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RawPoetry In reply to KelpGull [2017-12-11 15:01:40 +0000 UTC]

They are all seriously the sassiest. They will bite my hand if I don't put their food bowl down fast enough. 

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Drathemeir [2017-11-30 04:54:08 +0000 UTC]

My goodness I own 4 chickens 3 of them are sweet hearts one jumped up and bit my butt xD chickens despite being asses are pretty cute!

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RawPoetry In reply to Drathemeir [2017-12-11 15:01:15 +0000 UTC]

Haha yes they can be jerks! They are lucky that they're cute and can get away with it!

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Twystedroots [2017-11-29 17:57:33 +0000 UTC]

Fab photo - your story of your chickens made me laugh so thanks for sharing  

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RawPoetry In reply to Twystedroots [2017-11-29 21:32:56 +0000 UTC]

Glad you enjoyed it! They are assholes but I still love them!  

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