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RawrKijett — The Last Breathe
Published: 2003-12-01 14:36:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 122; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 11
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Ice cold deliverancea breathe cut short
a tart word
cut into the depths of a throat
a dream of sucide
a reverie lost in truce
and a poem to go along
with the last breathe she has
a forgotten note
addressed to a lover dear
buried along with her soul
a lost mind
in which every crevice lies
a secret yet to be untold
your mind is a record
of memories and hardships
but what happens to it?
once you've taken your last breathe?
does it go blank?
or stay with you?
an undescribeable emotion
eyes barely open
ice cold tear drops
lost in the breathe of life
gapeing for one more chance
to redo what was done
then regret slowly drags you under
letting you gasp for breathe..
then you're dead.
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Comments: 3
This is beautiful, and as the person above me said, powerful.
Totally awesome work!
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nice o___o I like it. envokes alot of thought ^^
I like how you use such freestyle in your poetry; how you dont follow any certain beat or pattern thats extremely rhytmical.
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