HOME | DD
Raxion — Mirasis Novablade Expression Sheet 2
Published: 2014-02-25 12:01:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 677; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 2
Redirect to original
Description
Still futzing around with some power ideas, need to get a ref figured out soon!
Related content
Comments: 4
Wow she actually looks pretty young! would this be before The Divide? :0
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
I have no idea at the moment lol
👍: 0 ⏩: 0
I hope you're feeling better after the pepper incident. I was pretty concerned about you when you decided to pull off a stunt like that.
By the way, are you teaming up with anyone or going solo on this one?
Especially when it comes down to the two pictures near the top left, I'd like to think your art style feels like it improved by visually feeling a lot more "solid" while the poses feel a little more justified feel more compatible with your talent towards making great facial expressions.
I think my main constructive advice goes to the "blasting" stance at the right. Personally, I think could be stronger or feel more like power is being channeled into the blast. Maybe just a little too relaxed for my taste? I understand what you were going for in terms of showing a sense of strength by being able to use a more calm pose, even for a blast like that. Still, I think the pose could be slightly more dynamic, even subtly. A few ideas I might have towards that would be widening the stance/distance between the legs, leaning Mirasis a little bit more forward (also thinking about how that could help resist the recoil), raising her left arm in the back, showing more tilt in the shoulder, etc.
Gosh, just all of your little preview drawings alone, tempt me more and more into Walking City. It's nice to see that you're preparing for it. Gosh, if I decide to compete, there's at least one competitor I know whose really putting his all into this. That's intimidating enough for an inexperienced OCT competitor like me. Nonetheless, I will 100% support your "Walking City" endeavors no matter what ends up happening!
Keep showing your little doodles and what not for this. Since more seem to be coming, I would certainly look forward to them!
👍: 0 ⏩: 1
It takes a lot more than that to slow the likes of me down hahahaha
We'll see on the partner thing as the day comes closer : D
They stand out primarily because they're more high-contrast against the paper and thus direct your eyes there as a focal point where the rest of the sketches are a muddled mess of gesture and half-thought ideas without references because I was drawing them at a cigar lounge xD They definitely could stand for a heavier gesture touch-up, though I probably would go and use better refs for them or pay off other customers around me to pose for me lol I wouldn't even call the stance a blasting one as much as it is a Pulling one since she can pull people towards her. That one's going to take a lot more work to find a good visual flow to, though I should probably do that study when I've actually got a set of references better set up or go pose them myself xD
There are plenty of inexperienced competitors who make fantastic OCT entries! At the end of the day, it's just writing an entertaining comic for the audience 8D
I'll definitely keep posting them up for sure and there's PLENTY more to come now that I'm getting back into the swing of things with drawing. Spent too many months only drawing for drunk streams xD
👍: 0 ⏩: 0