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Published: 2014-05-11 04:09:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 696; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 0
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Erm....so this is a little sappier than my usual stuff....hehe....ah well, what can I say?Sometimes, it's the little things that really make an impact. Someone goes out of their way to do something small, nothing grandiose, but it means so much. More than they might even imagine.
I dedicate this to the people who do the little things, the ones who remind me why they're so important, and to those I love so very dearly.
Cheers,
~Rayen
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Art Credit - "Waiting" by Juhupainting Â
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Comments: 15
not too sappy, just a bit.. emotional
(kinda reminds me of "the name of the wind" in some places...
but thats probably just me, feel free to ignore it 
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Yeah....ah well, I'm a romantic. What can I say XD
And thanks. It's a compliment, actually! I've never read it though....I should.
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sorry
i can imagine that it must be really Diffusion to describe emotions without being corny
most people seem to believe that showing emotions is equal to showing weakness.
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Haha, don't apologize, you're fine. I'm a romantic and obviously, so are you, so 'tis fine! No offense taken.
Yes, that is quite true. Well, ironically enough, in person I'm quite shut in. I don't enjoy sharing my emotions too much with just anyone. Bit of a trust issue. But through a story? I love it!
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so true.. this goes fore me as well, just i cant write..
i remember my primary school teacher calling my mum after my first week in school, asking i was mute. not a joke, she really believed that. and she was right in a way
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Well, then you know the feeling ^.~
And hey, writing isn't the only way of expressing yourself! You've got your artwork
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you're right.. and i really try to draw whenever i can find the time, work is all commissions and restrictions at the moment.. the problem is that i simply cant draw when im feeling down. ive tried.
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Hrm....well...that is tough, isn't it....try to channel that feeling into something. Doesn't have to be creative, necessarily. For me, sometimes it's just sitting outside and breathing in fresh air and dreaming of something else. It uses up the bad emotions and creates good ones!
As for work, that's just sadly a part of life......sorry
*hug*
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I love it!
Especially the sappy stuff. It is really poetic and paints images in my head. Which I like (if the image isn't wearing a pink tutu ;D) and you do it in a most graceful way.
'The only thing that made me 'stumble' a bit was 'variations and waves created by the crashing waves', that seemed a bit off, but apart from that, great! I loved the ' We are the calm within the storm'!
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Heehee....I'm not big into writing sappy stuff....or rather, I wasn't. But...I dunno....you need to once in a while, you know? XD
And thanks!
I tried a different style with this piece. More...stream of thought. Less descriptions, more emotions.
And thanks for the critique! People are....almost afraid to give it sometimes, haha.
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That one goes to Juhupainting ! I just wrote the story alongside ^.~
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