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raygore — CONVULSIVE UNWORLDLY
Published: 2007-01-15 15:26:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 282; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 2
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Description See the way that
  I adore you
In the silence
  I behold you
In the darkness
  see no nightmares
  only glimpse
  a better dream.
In the way that
  I have fallen
I can hear my
  darkness calling
Set up for me
  ugly torture
  sick devious
  bitter screams.

You've shown your
  cancerous proofs
They show me
  nothing of light
    but I have
Set myself up
  just for a fight
Until my body is
weakened
   and I fall
    away.

You're misguided
  and I love it
Choose a dark way
  you'll enslave me
In the end it
  never matters
  who's the savior
  anyway.
But the truth is
  I'm scared shitless
Carry on though
  I am worthless
Shown a man not
  worth the effort
  of a demigodess
  dream.
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Comments: 14

themyssing [2007-02-07 09:14:16 +0000 UTC]

Cool.
I've been writing a lot of songs lately, which why I haven't updated anything.

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raygore In reply to themyssing [2007-02-07 14:25:38 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, so have I. When I feel crappy, I write about it.

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loved-inspiration [2007-02-05 05:42:10 +0000 UTC]

i like it a lot. great play with words and awesome rhythm.

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raygore In reply to loved-inspiration [2007-02-05 14:18:11 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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loved-inspiration In reply to raygore [2007-02-05 17:04:59 +0000 UTC]

no probs. you deserve it.

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painfullyboring [2007-01-19 05:17:22 +0000 UTC]

"wow. dat's beauiful."

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raygore In reply to painfullyboring [2007-01-21 04:30:50 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!!!

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aadagio [2007-01-16 18:51:19 +0000 UTC]

Lovely.

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raygore In reply to aadagio [2007-01-18 13:33:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank you muchly.

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kirsche--electricity [2007-01-15 18:03:26 +0000 UTC]

catchy

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raygore In reply to kirsche--electricity [2007-01-18 13:33:00 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, catchy is good.

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LeonisTheEnigma [2007-01-15 15:27:42 +0000 UTC]

Woo! Its just both a great poem and a great song, what kind of music goes with it? Totally a great work of art!

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raygore In reply to LeonisTheEnigma [2007-01-15 16:57:00 +0000 UTC]

Thank you much for the fave!!!

It actually goes with a metal riff I'm working on.

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LeonisTheEnigma In reply to raygore [2007-01-15 17:29:20 +0000 UTC]

Nice.

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