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raygore — I LIVE ON ANTIFREEZE
Published: 2006-10-10 22:20:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 181; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 1
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Description You say you feel, yet never speak
except to speak of silence.
When you are pushed up to your peak
such gentle show of violence.

Once shining lovely
but never again.

You push away all thought of pain
except if it's your body.
You want to fill your life with rain
share emotions with nobody.

See, once again
you hide from me.

Sure, it's truth- but all of it?
You said you wanted so much.
You just don't want to face real shit.
Your love is cold to touch.

How can you live?
Want my antifreeze?

I want truth- not all of it.
God damn, I just want so much!
I just don't want to face real shit.
Think I'll use a lighter touch.

Look how I live
Live on antifreeze.
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Comments: 17

loved-inspiration [2007-02-08 00:21:53 +0000 UTC]

awesome job. i like it a lot because of the emotion put into it.

Your love is cold to touch.

i have actually heard that being said about a friend of mine; therefor, it sounds so real.
job well done.

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raygore In reply to loved-inspiration [2007-02-08 12:24:27 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, I'm glad you like it!

I did write this from alot of emotion, so I'm happy that it shows.

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loved-inspiration In reply to raygore [2007-02-09 02:13:53 +0000 UTC]

its sure did. awesome, once again.

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raygore In reply to loved-inspiration [2007-02-10 17:09:23 +0000 UTC]

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kLiT-sHy [2007-01-29 18:25:50 +0000 UTC]

What I like about your style? The moment I read it I could sense every piece of honesty. Keep it up. I like this poem.

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raygore In reply to kLiT-sHy [2007-02-01 01:17:00 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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sharp-side-up [2006-10-10 22:25:37 +0000 UTC]

"Look how I live
Live on antifreeze"

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raygore In reply to sharp-side-up [2006-10-11 12:09:02 +0000 UTC]

hmmmhhh....what's this?
A typo, say you?
Tee hee, tee hee
tee hee
tee......who?

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sharp-side-up In reply to raygore [2006-10-11 21:47:05 +0000 UTC]

No no! I quite like the way it flows with two "live"s.

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raygore In reply to sharp-side-up [2006-10-11 22:21:02 +0000 UTC]

Oh, I do too!
I thought you were referring to the fact that the second "live" was not capitalised. I don't know, should it be? lol!:>

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sharp-side-up In reply to raygore [2006-10-11 23:32:05 +0000 UTC]

Doesn't matter! I just meant I really really really adore that line!

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raygore In reply to sharp-side-up [2006-10-12 00:41:48 +0000 UTC]

Cool!

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sharp-side-up In reply to raygore [2006-10-12 00:43:48 +0000 UTC]

:+watch:, thanks! And you faved Misery Loves Company. Thanks again!

My other account is ~grey-skies-industry Really I think my better work is there, since this was once a shared account... But it's now mine for the most part.

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raygore In reply to sharp-side-up [2006-10-12 00:49:56 +0000 UTC]

I'll check it out!

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sharp-side-up In reply to raygore [2006-10-12 01:09:21 +0000 UTC]

Many thanks!

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starlit-sky [2006-10-10 22:23:19 +0000 UTC]

i like it very much
very heartfelt

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raygore In reply to starlit-sky [2006-10-11 00:05:29 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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