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rb1294 — Touch You
Published: 2009-04-23 15:35:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 411; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 16
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I just wannaTouch you,
Feel your skin
Against mine,
Breathe you in
As your breathe
Mingles with mine,
I wanna fall asleep
With you in my arms,
And wake with your
Head on my chest,
I want you now,
And I want you forever,
My hand reaches out,
Fingertips stretched,
As you extend your
Hand to mine
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Comments: 10
It is beautiful. I think that this would fit alot of people who are in love or are falling in love. I would really enjoy rteading more of your poems like this.
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I'm glad you like my work, and thanks for the favs
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It is no problem. You deserve to get credit for your outstanding work.
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It is lovely, though with a few typos I think. But the poem is sweet.
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omg.. some of the spelling mistakes here are hilarious.. hand to mind instead of hand to mine.. and wake with you head on my chest.. should be your.. but very lovely.. this is what i want in life as well..
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hahaha, well I think I fixed them, sometimes my mind goes faster thank I typed, thanks for the heads up
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