altruisticlies [2002-11-13 17:44:11 +0000 UTC]
Warm fuzzy feeling I'm sure every parent feels.
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chobman [2002-11-07 09:51:43 +0000 UTC]
nicley written however i cant really relate at all but im sure it is a wonderful experience
asht535 [2002-10-09 07:30:29 +0000 UTC]
beautiful! ... so much innocence and emotion pouring out of this piece... it's so touching very very good use of words to capture a moment so unforgettable ... great work man!
sansiden [2002-10-04 14:38:33 +0000 UTC]
if i was a parent im sure i could relate to this. Such an innocent atmosphere.