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rcybergeek — Stolen Innocence-Child Thief
Published: 2002-07-30 17:37:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 354; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 3
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Description Not too long ago, I heard the 911 tape of the man who found the body of the 6 year-old girl in California - I read that she was laid to rest today. I was on my way home when I heard the 911 tape. On my way home to my 18 month-old son. It is difficult to drive with tears in your eyes. I have though a lot about the child abductions in the news lately. I get so angry and upset. I cannot possibly put into words what I feel, but here, at least, is an attempt. It is not my best work, but I hope it makes you pause and think.
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lamadeline9 [2010-08-27 06:42:00 +0000 UTC]

Im not a parent but i have 5 sisters and 1 brother and i gaurd them and watch over them with my life.

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traerene [2002-11-21 15:40:23 +0000 UTC]

i'm totally there man! i have a 7 year old and a 7 month old, and it's a scary freakin world for kids today!! your baby is absolutely beautiful btw, and this is so full of emotion!!! very nice!

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dezzyz [2002-10-02 21:37:39 +0000 UTC]

love this one. it does make you stop and think about lifes lil precious ones. was a great read and a good capture of emotion.

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hobbit125 [2002-08-27 18:31:08 +0000 UTC]

Very powerful. The last line particularly....really grabbed me. Kind of a sudden anger.

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effendi [2002-08-26 21:34:42 +0000 UTC]

I really like this poem. I'm not a parent but I work with kids and this past summer I was a full-time babysitter for 3 kids..and the thought of one of them being hurt or kidnapped tears me up! Great Work! (your son is adorable, too!)

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wizzo [2002-08-22 20:49:20 +0000 UTC]

I too find the actions of these abductors enraging. This is a powerful piece, and I do believe you when you say you will kill whomever tries to take your child away. Having none of my own, I cannot fully empathize... but having a 18 month old niece, I do understand to an extent.

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open-your-eyes [2002-08-12 16:06:46 +0000 UTC]

I like this, and I'm not a parent either, but I do understand that bond...It makes me want to cry now to think of all those children who are raped and killed when they are like 7...that's just horrible...Anyway...Great poem.

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anu666 [2002-08-02 21:57:35 +0000 UTC]

I'm not a parent, so I could never understand the bond that you would have with a child. Nevertheless, this is very powerful poetry, and from the heart. Greatwork. Hope you get some of the tension out soon Good Luck and keep writing!

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rcybergeek [2002-07-30 17:41:37 +0000 UTC]

BTW - this is a picture of him when he was only a month or so old. This is the only one good one I could find of him sleeping.

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