VKA3 [2017-07-05 09:10:20 +0000 UTC]
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Hi, I am Vern a.deviantart.net/avatars/v/k/v… " alt=" " title="VKA3" /> and I am here to critique your artwork.Overview - We have a woman with a golden apple that glows. There is an eye watching her from the shadows. From the Description of the painting, we are told that the woman is Aphrodite and the eye is Hera. The description goes on to tell the story of Aphrodite. I chose to critique this picture because it is a very abstract picture.Eye - The eye is very well done and you can see highlights and shading in the eye. I can't tell whether it is a man's eye or a woman's eye.Background - The background is very abstract and it is difficult to know what is going on. I can't quite know what is going on. I know that the bottom of my right of the picture is pillars and fire. The top half of my right of the picture is consumed by fire. It the fire created by the Golden Apple? The top left features Hera's eye, And the bottom left is something. The barrier between Venus and the background is a little difficult to distinguish.Venus - She is drawn very lovely and her face is beautiful. Her hair is a little too far up on the head and it looks like she is going bald. The rest of her is great. Excellent job. Description - You have done a great job in the description of detailing Venus and her life. You have done an excellent job. Could you please describe what is going on in the background?Conclusion - You have done an excellent job of detailing Aphrodite (I called her Venus because it is shorter) And the picture is very abstract. I look forward to seeing many more pictures of yours. I was a pleasure critiquing you. Have a great day.
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