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Emerald-Thrakena [2016-06-25 01:54:59 +0000 UTC]
Hi Anna this is Pat from the Inspiring Creation critique gallery.
I'm not familiar with the characters from Game of thrones so I'm not sure what the object is behind your figure of the maiden.
I think this is a beautiful drawing. The one thing I would suggest to improve it is to move the object behind her a little more to the right. Just for composition sake . It would give the composition a little bit more balance on that side.
Your textures are very well done. The gown looks very flowing and delicate with the sweeping lines. Very nice use of of repeating forms creating very nice Rhythm and motion .
The technique you used to do the dragon scales is very realistic and wonderfully done. Facial features and anatomy of your woman is so very good.
The mood of the drawing makes me feel that this creature adores his mistress.
Outside of the possible imbalance on the object at the top I feel you have done an exceptional job on this drawing.
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diosrubra [2016-06-22 15:54:43 +0000 UTC]
very well drawn you can tell who its meant to be excellent textures especially on the dragon you can make it more realistic if you make the skin tone go all the way to the edge to get rid of the strong outline and could tone down the shading just above her lip. the lines of the dress is beautifully done you obviously spent a lot of time on it. the muscles on her neck are perfect.
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diosrubra In reply to ReaperBunny [2016-06-22 16:10:16 +0000 UTC]
sehr gut gezeichnet kann Sie sagen, wer seine soll hervorragende Texturen vor allem auf den Drachen, die Sie es realistischer machen können, wenn Sie den Hautton gehen ganz an den Rand, die starke Gliederung loszuwerden und die Schattierung oberhalb ihrer Unterlippe abschwächen könnte. die Linien des Kleides ist sehr schön gestaltet Sie offensichtlich dafür aufgewendet viel Zeit. die Muskeln am Hals sind perfekt. hope this helps
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diosrubra In reply to ReaperBunny [2016-06-22 16:17:01 +0000 UTC]
lol almost dragons skin is fine her arms have a black outline
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diosrubra In reply to ReaperBunny [2016-06-22 16:23:35 +0000 UTC]
look forward to more of your art really nice work
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therogueone [2016-06-06 21:42:17 +0000 UTC]
I love the way you made her look! It's semi-realistic, semi-anime, all beautiful. Great job! You should color it one day, too, maybe? ^^)
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Violet-Daze [2016-05-31 15:38:25 +0000 UTC]
This is amazing and so detailed!!
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