dreamy-roses [2018-04-21 22:28:18 +0000 UTC]
Overall
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Impact
I love:
-Her hair. It stood out to me immediately, because it's been rendered beautifully. The shadows in her hair, along with the sparkles look wonderful!
- I adore the way you drew the face. The shadows from her hair look awesome, it's a subtle detail that makes her look more real. The character's expression is cheerful and seems wholesome, suggesting she has a pleasant personality. And of course, the eyes!!! Her eyes are stunning. I love that the color goes well with the purple in her clothing.
- A bit repetitive, but again with the shadows. I love them, and you've incorporated them nicely into the entire piece. Placing shadows where they belong is important, and you've done an excellent job at it!
(Minor) Issues:
- The green button in the middle of her shirt doesn't look very detailed, and I think it should be straighter. It looks tilted, and unfortunately, that serves as a bit of a distraction.
- Her right thumb looks more awkward in comparison to the right. It's clearly higher up than the thumb on the left, (so, therefore, making it look a bit shorter makes sense). However, it looks sharper and stubbier. I would also add darker shadows to the fingers, especially on the index finger on the right hand.
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ToriStarfire [2018-04-22 00:00:32 +0000 UTC]
O por dioooos!!! Te quedó bellísima!! El coloreado, las lineas todo es tan andjakdkkaks admiro como haces las expresiones faciales, son tan agradables a la vista que te da un anskaks cada vez las ves :"0♡♡♡ es simplemente hermoso U w,U💙💚❤💛💜
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