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Published: 2011-09-03 17:01:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 187; Favourites: 6; Downloads: 0
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Description Truthfully, I never thought you'd be the one to
Rip what we had between
Us into tiny pieces. I'll never make the
Same mistake that got me into
This mess in the first place;
I'll be more careful when
Naming my friends I'll stand by till the end.
Guess we both screwed up pretty bad this time.
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Comments: 4

w-anderlust [2011-12-11 18:40:48 +0000 UTC]

Even if you didn't follow the rules, you wrote it brilliantly.

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MissMurderFish [2011-09-03 23:47:50 +0000 UTC]

Hehe, yay!!!!
And there are different kinds of acrostics. XD
I love this.

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Red-Jello In reply to MissMurderFish [2011-09-04 05:13:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!
And thank goodness, I wasn't even sure if this qualified and was too lazy to look it up. >.<

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MissMurderFish In reply to Red-Jello [2011-09-04 17:45:53 +0000 UTC]


Well, I'd take my encouragement with a grain or two of salt, 'cause I'm not the most qualified to make that decision, BUT it's a nice poem and so what if it's new...isn't that the point of art in general, to make something new? (I dunno.)

Anyways,
I liked the content of the poem, too.

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