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Published: 2013-09-03 11:01:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 2071; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 13
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Description Hi people! I was left without my translator.
so, if you find an error in the wording, feel free to suggest me how to fix it.

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Comments: 26

Mouchkaa [2014-01-17 10:02:29 +0000 UTC]

But Guest appreciates to make love with Verakt or not, because she grumbles every time ("not again...")? Seen his look on the last panel. BUT on the part 23, she is nostalgic? with "I don't need it now..." ?????

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RedBast In reply to Mouchkaa [2014-01-17 11:15:59 +0000 UTC]

all very complicated...

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Mouchkaa In reply to RedBast [2014-01-18 20:58:42 +0000 UTC]

Haha ^^

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MetalPorSiempre [2013-09-04 22:31:03 +0000 UTC]

Two mistakes (but not serious at all):


"What are they doing on my hands?"


"Take them off immediately!"

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RedBast In reply to MetalPorSiempre [2013-09-06 13:18:21 +0000 UTC]

thanks! fixed #2

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PaintStrip In reply to MetalPorSiempre [2013-09-05 00:29:51 +0000 UTC]

the first one is fine, you don't have to change it to 'they'. these perfectly fits in with this section of the comic.
as to the take off immediately, yea that may be changes to 'take them off immediately' but you still get the gist and its not like she's going to talk proper when she's naked and tied up is she? she would just want to get her point across which she did. 


Amazing last picture by the way! totally love it

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RedBast In reply to PaintStrip [2013-09-06 13:18:34 +0000 UTC]

thanks a lot! :3

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Lenoa-of-Elacas [2013-09-03 20:02:59 +0000 UTC]

HOLY DAMN! Look at him in that last panel. He looks.... GENTLE. Truly a sign of the end of days.


Plus whooo mama look at those arms! I've always been a sucker for strong arms.

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RedBast In reply to Lenoa-of-Elacas [2013-09-06 13:17:51 +0000 UTC]

behavior of Verakt - always suddenness

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Rock-N-Roller14 [2013-09-03 17:45:11 +0000 UTC]

The last picture is so intense but loving at the same time

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RedBast In reply to Rock-N-Roller14 [2013-09-06 13:13:46 +0000 UTC]

:3

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SlayerXiena [2013-09-03 17:39:47 +0000 UTC]

He gives this feeling like he wants to put a tattoo branding on that part of her neck 

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RedBast In reply to SlayerXiena [2013-09-06 13:13:32 +0000 UTC]

lol nice idea)

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SlayerXiena In reply to RedBast [2013-09-06 14:15:08 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Though I doubt that is what you were going to do right?

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RedBast In reply to SlayerXiena [2013-09-06 14:21:33 +0000 UTC]

it is still too early for a tattoo)))


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SlayerXiena In reply to RedBast [2013-09-06 15:00:35 +0000 UTC]

Well then I can't wait till its Tattoo time LOL

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FaolNaGael In reply to SlayerXiena [2013-09-03 23:47:34 +0000 UTC]

I was just thinking that.

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SlayerXiena In reply to FaolNaGael [2013-09-04 00:23:09 +0000 UTC]

LOL Think he'll put his name or a neat tribal that represents him?

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FaolNaGael In reply to SlayerXiena [2013-09-04 04:52:30 +0000 UTC]

Can't say for sure, but I'd lean more towards something tribal if he did.

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SlayerXiena In reply to FaolNaGael [2013-09-04 05:52:47 +0000 UTC]

Me too

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Wolcan [2013-09-03 13:40:23 +0000 UTC]

She's totally going to kill him. xD

I really love the last panel, si nice. <3

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RedBast In reply to Wolcan [2013-09-06 13:12:37 +0000 UTC]

how can wish death to such a man , even if he is such a bastard?))))))))

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OceanFire9 [2013-09-03 12:57:34 +0000 UTC]

Can't help liking how he looks at her in the last panel. And I'm so curious! I can't wait to see what's next!

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RedBast In reply to OceanFire9 [2013-09-06 13:09:32 +0000 UTC]

:3

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sussthedevil [2013-09-03 11:46:07 +0000 UTC]

im so in love with the last picture Oo their  expressions and his softness Oo

I want him xD 

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RedBast In reply to sussthedevil [2013-09-06 13:07:59 +0000 UTC]

haha I understand your wishes

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