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RedEarthofTerra — Pale
Published: 2009-06-20 04:04:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 69; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 1
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You are all bark and no bite.Your lips against mine a
feeble attempt at
capture.
Your hands shy and shaky instead of sure,
Your breath quiet and quaky instead of
pure,
the sun on my face stronger,
a head rush longer
a spell
than any
you've cast on me.
Your actions pale
in the shadow of your words
and you hardly speak of it
at all.
Comments: 9
"Your hands shy and shaky instead of sure,
Your breath quiet and quaky instead of
pure,"
♥ loove that
great ending (:
i am down to thirty-four deviations in my watch and they are all yours... prepare for a shower of comments
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Ha ha, no problem. Sorry about the large quantity of them!
I really need to look through mine, I have like 163 or some painful number...
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not a problem, it was a great binge of your work ♥
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over all this is a mighty fine poem. i always love your work, you know. the rythm is a little strange, the rhym is good, i just noticed my spelling sux. i do like this poem a lot though. its has a sence of spirituality.
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Yeah, it is a little strange. Oh well. Thank you!
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