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RedFawkes β€” Memories of You
Published: 2010-07-27 14:30:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 1928; Favourites: 16; Downloads: 4
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Description (I)

    Summer's heat clung to us like guilty secrets, so at odds with our childish delight. We neverΒ kept track of the time, but we knew that we'd been out too long when our heavy limbs were patterned with grass and freckles. I told you that freckles were sun kisses, and you said that you weren't the jealous type, but you didn't act like it, did you?

(II)

    We combined good posture with slouchy clothes and found comfort in straight-backed iron chairs. We rode public buses until midnight and picked our favourite cafΓ©s based on the songs they played, thinking that music and food were equal to our ideas of love. We thought that we knew what we were looking for, and you always said that we'd know it when we found it, but you really had no idea, did you?

(III)

    Forgotten homes and once-warm kitchens became our refuge; a fortress built of our own imagining. Rainy days were spent sitting on cold floors, searching for scattered memories. We rescued second-hand books and painted all four chambers of our heart apartment a different colour. You promised that you would keep me safe, but you never admitted that you were just as scared and lost as I was, did you?
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Comments: 10

VampiricBunny [2010-08-05 22:38:56 +0000 UTC]

wonderful, miss k.

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RedFawkes In reply to VampiricBunny [2010-08-06 19:14:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!
It means a lot that you think so.

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Obsidian-Nightfall [2010-08-01 07:38:38 +0000 UTC]

Some nice writing here, well done...

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RedFawkes In reply to Obsidian-Nightfall [2010-08-01 14:53:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you - that is very kind of you to say.

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Jenu1 [2010-07-30 04:49:59 +0000 UTC]

This is incredibly powerful and beautiful. I don't know why you're not happy with the piece, it's extremely impactful.

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RedFawkes In reply to Jenu1 [2010-07-30 14:39:09 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!
I'm very happy to hear that you like it.
I felt unhappy with the piece simply because I felt that it was more difficult to write than it ought to be...
I'm sure that that makes very little sense, but oh, well.

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ru-kitsuneJ [2010-07-27 21:43:44 +0000 UTC]

This is really beautiful Kat, but I do wonder what inspired it...

Either way it's great work and it pulled me in from the start!

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RedFawkes In reply to ru-kitsuneJ [2010-07-28 10:11:02 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!
I'm very glad to know that you like it.
And as for what inspired it, it was lots of different things, I guess.

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platinummyr [2010-07-27 15:26:54 +0000 UTC]

i never did tell you

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RedFawkes In reply to platinummyr [2010-07-28 09:57:58 +0000 UTC]

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