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Viljonkka [2014-09-20 10:26:15 +0000 UTC]

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I am not the best person to ask critique from. Firstly, there is always room for improvement, we all get better as we draw, paint or what ever we want to do. I think your style is great, and your art is very, very inspirising (bad english, i am sorry). Everything in your abstract art kind of remains the same, style, the fact that every piece has some sort of message in them. I cannot think up anything that you should start to improve on. I'm not as great artist that you are, but i suppose you should atleast try to draw with a different style, i'm not saying either, that you should go outside and draw a fucking appletree. You should keep your abstract style and be proud of it. As i said, i am not the most great person on critique

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RedTweny In reply to Viljonkka [2014-09-22 16:11:59 +0000 UTC]

Thkas Viljonkka...you are a nice person and I appreciate your nice words.
take care form Red !

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Regal-Pinion [2013-10-09 22:45:04 +0000 UTC]

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Now, before I begin this is my first time observing your work, so I decided to be a creep and look at your older works to compare to. So I guess this means the scores I gave you are bias since I am only comparing them to the work you presented in your gallery.
Alrighty... let's do this:

Out of the 188 pieces in your main gallery (so far), this is by far the most abstract piece of art you have submitted. So your style remained but your end product was different. Which is a great thing.

I will admit that I am not quite sure what I felt as I first saw this. And I still don't. Perhaps it represents one massive confusing mass hiding behind a "Black Scream". The more I look at it the more I try to make sense of the surreality. Not a bad thing, mind you.

The technique is 3 not because it sucked (because believe me, this is pretty nifty), nut because there is always, room for improvement. You are aware of your style, and you do it well, yet that is all I see. That doesn't mean go outside and paint a picture of realistic canaries. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/let… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="395" title=" (Lick)"/>
I mean it in a way that I have no other style to compare to, but damn do you do well with this one.

"There are many emotions we can evoke, but which one produces a black scream?"

Hope this helps. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>

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RedTweny In reply to Regal-Pinion [2013-10-10 06:57:56 +0000 UTC]

hmmmm...what does this mean a black scream? Hands tied, bodily forms characterized by great vitality-strength, eyes closed ... this means to me mainly powerlessness. A scream even more helpless because silent (for this is black, like the silence in the dark night).


Thanks for your criticism and for the time that you spent on it.


This is great for me!


Red

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Regal-Pinion In reply to RedTweny [2013-10-12 22:06:30 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad I could help.

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graacehh [2014-07-13 05:31:57 +0000 UTC]

I absolutley love your style! It reminds me of Francis Bacon, you are very very talented!

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RedTweny In reply to graacehh [2014-07-13 14:03:37 +0000 UTC]

Francis Bacon it is aΒ unattainable target...I try to do something different butΒ somehow close to his message and his feeling. ItΒ is an honor to be likened to Bacon ..thks dear ! Take care

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bear48 [2014-01-02 01:43:29 +0000 UTC]

the archetype of fear

I have nightmares much like this

deeply moving

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RedTweny In reply to bear48 [2014-01-02 20:34:48 +0000 UTC]

this mean that you are human !

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offermoord [2013-11-18 02:32:28 +0000 UTC]

Featured in our monthly journal


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RedTweny In reply to offermoord [2013-11-18 19:39:23 +0000 UTC]

thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu !!

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JazmarArts [2013-10-09 09:04:01 +0000 UTC]

Fantastic!Β  Brings to mind these guys (my most favorite Francis Bacon works ever!!)

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RedTweny In reply to JazmarArts [2013-10-09 11:19:21 +0000 UTC]

but of course !!!! Β I'm convincing myself - lately - to be his italian reincarnation !!!


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JazmarArts In reply to RedTweny [2013-10-10 07:31:14 +0000 UTC]

I can see it!

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bear48 [2013-10-08 22:45:03 +0000 UTC]

and now we all run away

very nice work

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RedTweny In reply to bear48 [2013-10-09 08:16:39 +0000 UTC]

ahhahhahhaahha !!!! YHKS Bear ....

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Fractalvision [2013-10-07 17:35:39 +0000 UTC]

Scary!

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RedTweny In reply to Fractalvision [2013-10-08 04:37:24 +0000 UTC]

yes...a little bit !! THKS as AlwaysΒ 

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leppakakaklifoth [2013-10-06 10:21:54 +0000 UTC]

great work

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RedTweny In reply to leppakakaklifoth [2013-10-06 17:22:38 +0000 UTC]

you are always welcome my friend...

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leppakakaklifoth In reply to RedTweny [2013-10-07 02:30:14 +0000 UTC]

You`re welcome

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Gagoterapia [2013-10-06 08:10:02 +0000 UTC]

Awesome!

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RedTweny In reply to Gagoterapia [2013-10-06 09:19:09 +0000 UTC]

you are most welcome !

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ulltraz [2013-10-06 03:40:10 +0000 UTC]

nice!!Β 

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RedTweny In reply to ulltraz [2013-10-06 07:20:47 +0000 UTC]

...nice scream ??!!!Β  thank you...

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ulltraz In reply to RedTweny [2013-10-06 20:41:04 +0000 UTC]

you are welcome!!!its very well done!!Β 

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ShannC [2013-10-06 02:44:20 +0000 UTC]

awesome

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RedTweny In reply to ShannC [2013-10-06 07:21:03 +0000 UTC]

hmmmm....you are too generous !!!

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ShannC In reply to RedTweny [2013-10-06 15:32:17 +0000 UTC]

or perhaps not generous enough hah

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RedTweny In reply to ShannC [2013-10-06 17:23:19 +0000 UTC]

I dont think so....

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KhidirIshitar [2013-10-06 02:18:44 +0000 UTC]

I think I can see the scream but the overall impression to me is a woman looking to her right with a hair thingy in her hair~

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RedTweny In reply to KhidirIshitar [2013-10-06 07:21:56 +0000 UTC]

hmmmm.....hmmmmm....why not ????!! Thanks for your comment and impresion

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Karolusdiversion [2013-10-05 12:47:57 +0000 UTC]

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RedTweny In reply to Karolusdiversion [2013-10-05 17:10:03 +0000 UTC]

Grazie amico ...


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Karolusdiversion In reply to RedTweny [2013-10-06 13:04:10 +0000 UTC]

E' sempre un piacere per me incontrare la tua arte

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ArtCrusade [2013-10-05 10:48:46 +0000 UTC]

Great work as always! Still digging that style

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RedTweny In reply to ArtCrusade [2013-10-05 17:11:11 +0000 UTC]

Thks - as always - Crusade !

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