Comments: 42
dragonbabezee [2016-03-01 22:07:56 +0000 UTC]
Is it a birthday present??
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SaiyanPrince541 [2016-02-29 05:03:10 +0000 UTC]
Hey, you forgot to link to page 26!!!
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Brother-Malachai [2016-02-28 20:07:04 +0000 UTC]
Why can't Red write for Toei/Akira Toriyama? :-/
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Kasumi-Konran In reply to Brother-Malachai [2016-09-20 10:17:00 +0000 UTC]
Omg, yes! He could learn from her, because he said he isn't good in romantical scenes.
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elymh [2016-02-28 13:47:44 +0000 UTC]
OoOh!! cant wait!!
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elymh In reply to RedViolett [2016-02-28 14:56:46 +0000 UTC]
yeah!!
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bony-em [2016-02-26 19:36:06 +0000 UTC]
Oooh I wanna know what she's going to give him, and how he'll react!
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RedViolett In reply to bony-em [2016-02-28 14:36:54 +0000 UTC]
Aww soon we will. I hope to upload the newest page today
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NSwisher1572 [2016-02-26 16:09:58 +0000 UTC]
Gaaaaah I've read past this point in the fanfiction so I know almost exactly what's going to happen~
THE SUSPENSE IS REAL!
I really have to commend you on Vegeta's facial expressions these past few pages. You've always had an amazing talent for that sort of thing, but now, during this roof scene, he just seems so real. I can clearly see sadness, frustration, maybe some confusion and hopelessness, but it's all so subtle and creates this perfect sort of emotional blend. I especially loved the look on his face when Bulma first came up to the roof and there was a shot of him just sitting and looking at the sky -- absolutely perfect.
You brought up an interesting point about the stars, too: how they'd all look the same for someone like Vegeta, and how he might be ashamed of that fact, especially having traveled among them personally. He's such a self-loathing person, which was touched on briefly in the anime but not explored to nearly the depth I would have preferred. (That's what your story is for now, hey?)
I also find it intriguing that he's been looking for Planet Vegeta even though he knows it's long-gone. I headcanon that Planet Vegeta was so far away from Earth that its light is still shining even twenty-five years after its destruction, the way that most if not all stars that are visible to us on this planet have actually already died and are only still visible because they were so many light years away.
(Hah, that's even sadder for Vegeta -- to be able to "see" his home planet which no longer exists. At least in you're version it's totally gone, less heartache for him, the poor guy )
Ah, but I've rambled enough...
Can't wait for the next page, Red! <3
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NSwisher1572 [2016-02-26 16:09:06 +0000 UTC]
Gaaaaah I've read past this point in the fanfiction so I know almost exactly what's going to happen~
THE SUSPENSE IS REAL!
I really have to commend you on Vegeta's facial expressions these past few pages. You've always had an amazing talent for that sort of thing, but now, during this roof scene, he just seems so real. I can clearly see sadness, frustration, maybe some confusion and hopelessness, but it's all so subtle and creates this perfect sort of emotional blend. I especially loved the look on his face when Bulma first came up to the roof and there was a shot of him just sitting and looking at the sky -- absolutely perfect.
You brought up an interesting point about the stars, too: how they'd all look the same for someone like Vegeta, and how he might be ashamed of that fact, especially having traveled among them personally. He's such a self-loathing person, which was touched on briefly in the anime but not explored to nearly the depth I would have preferred. (That's what your story is for now, hey?)
I also find it intriguing that he's been looking for Planet Vegeta even though he knows it's long-gone. I headcanon that Planet Vegeta was so far away from Earth that its light is still shining even twenty-five years after its destruction, the way that most if not all stars that are visible to us on this planet have actually already died and are only still visible because they were so many light years away.
(Hah, that's even sadder for Vegeta -- to be able to "see" his home planet which no longer exists. At least in you're version it's totally gone, less heartache for him, the poor guy )
Ah, but I've rambled enough...
Can't wait for the next page, Red! <3
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annabel92 [2016-02-25 23:20:11 +0000 UTC]
A Gift? Or something more especial * 😘* hehe, maybe new armor?
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giiovz [2016-02-25 11:26:50 +0000 UTC]
What is it??
Stop making me nervous, Bulma!
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sophhiee [2016-02-25 09:45:49 +0000 UTC]
I can't wait to see what she's got for him and his reaction... I feel like he'll be reacting badly, though.
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Takashima-Yumemi [2016-02-25 02:29:52 +0000 UTC]
I wanna see! I swear if someone interrupts They are getting hit with a special beam canon
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RedViolett In reply to Takashima-Yumemi [2016-02-25 07:00:17 +0000 UTC]
Haha XD Let´s hope it´s nobody with the name of Yamcha XD
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Alphania [2016-02-24 22:17:52 +0000 UTC]
What is it???
a pregnant test XD hahaha . ok i know that, I anticipated for long
but can you imagine when that happen
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x-Zylk-x [2016-02-24 21:38:24 +0000 UTC]
god you're killing me o.O What is it?
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Knight3000 [2016-02-24 17:50:25 +0000 UTC]
This might be the moment Bulma and Vegetas feelings for each other comes out
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SeishinAnn [2016-02-24 16:34:24 +0000 UTC]
Don't mess it up!
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TheEmster97 [2016-02-24 15:39:54 +0000 UTC]
Don't mess this up Bulma...
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Andromada-Sama [2016-02-24 09:55:30 +0000 UTC]
Don't blow this Bulma. I can't handle anymore sexual tension >.<
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Kairi2805 [2016-02-24 09:47:55 +0000 UTC]
Top Seite ^^b
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