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coopyey [2010-07-31 16:31:26 +0000 UTC]
I enjoyed that. Quite a bit.
I think you should do what you're doing and continue it on. There's a lot of potential in this series. Rock it out, girl!
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ReignySkye In reply to coopyey [2010-07-31 17:08:43 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, Dearie! <3 Glad you like it. Any suggestions on anything in the series?
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coopyey In reply to ReignySkye [2010-07-31 17:15:50 +0000 UTC]
Not right now. But you know I'll drop you a comment or note if I have something~
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MentalArtistMel [2010-07-23 03:36:31 +0000 UTC]
Lawl, I love the dramatic change of mind Jon has throughout the letter. It's rather quite amusing and reminds me of the rash decisions I sometimes make. xD I really like this so far! I would love to see more letters of these adventures, I'm also curious as to if the girl went with him or not.
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ReignySkye In reply to MentalArtistMel [2010-07-23 03:57:22 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for reading, Mel. You're a doll. <3 I think I probably will consider continuing it. What I'll probably do is write out a few different third-person point of view "options" if you will, for how Jon's proposal to the girl goes, and I'll let you and the other readers decide how the story proceeds from there.
Each option will have a different idea of who the girl is. The girls will all be similar in a sense, but will also all be different. Different names, too, so I can more easily tell them apart.
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ReignySkye In reply to rjot [2010-07-22 16:29:18 +0000 UTC]
I'm thinking I'll probably do alternating pieces. Short stories in a third-person point of view and letters, maybe stops in places and phone calls home. Thanks for reading, and I'm glad you enjoyed it.
--Skye Reign
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ReignySkye In reply to rjot [2010-07-23 03:59:17 +0000 UTC]
Yeah... I'm thinking I'll probably make three or four options for the girl, write a different second part of this story for each girl, and let you and the other folks looking at this story decide which girl I'll proceed with.
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FFX-2lovr [2010-07-22 03:59:08 +0000 UTC]
I would Love to see this as a series. That would be amazing. I wanna know more!
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Boo-Brat [2010-07-22 03:47:03 +0000 UTC]
i really enjoyed this and would love it if you wrote a series of these letters/short stories. your an amazing writer.
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ReignySkye In reply to Boo-Brat [2010-07-22 03:53:46 +0000 UTC]
Aww, thank you! Would you mind telling me what you liked about it? For the sake of my own improvement as a writer, I kinda want to know what stood out to you, and why you want it continued...
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Boo-Brat In reply to ReignySkye [2010-07-22 04:14:54 +0000 UTC]
i like how almost the whole letter is about this girl and how it just seems they are both lost soles looking for adventure.
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ReignySkye In reply to Boo-Brat [2010-07-22 04:19:13 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for letting me know.
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