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Published: 2012-06-13 05:53:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 237; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 4
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(Since I'm pretty sure since this is part of R2 I sould need to add it to the R2 folder... >__>; )Edit: I fixed that typo thing...the 'pharaoh' one.
OH RIGHT THE CURSING.
Please excuse me for those words. Normally my limit is probably 2 or less but his mom really needed some emphasis on how much of a bitch she really was and how much of a strung out druggie she was as well so it was merely to add emphasis. nothing more.
Alright, I did my first side entry for Erskine and Wadimon. I don't even have a title for it at all...I might just call it something obvious or name it with one word like 'Stupidity' or 'Conversation'.
Anyway. This is to get a feel on how Rennutmon behaves, acts, her personality, etc. Erskine doesn't like it and he reveals just what happened to him when he was a small child. Any questions at all just make sure you add them into a comment.
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Nice, this definitely gives better view about both characters and helps to understand them better. My favourite pannel is probably number 4, I like her expression x3. Erski's mom is an asshole :V.
I was going to point out the "Pharaoh" thing but Gomis was faster :3.
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Yay! I had to make up for that and I haff done that!. That panel and the first one are my favorites and yes his mom is an asshole. It sucks drawing or even attempting to draw her.
But thank you for reminding me DX.
-fixes-
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Woah, so many cool things! 8D
I really like the fact that you decided to do something like this, it really gives us a deeper look on Erskine and Wadimon!
One thing I have to ask though, are you purpously misspelling pharaoh because it's spelled pharoah every time?
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adalfaj;
I did spell it wrong! DX I swear I thought I was spelling it right ;_;
But thank you tons! I felt that Rennutmon didn't really give /too/ too much of her personality in my round, so I decided to delve into that more for her and give a bit of a background of where Erskine came from.
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Oh no..! D:
I agree, Rennutmon came in so late in the round she didn't really show her personality..!
It's also good to see a deeper side of Ersky. 83
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Yus <3
Hopefully I rectified this well enough.
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Generic chips! I lol'd XD
; ^ ; poor Erskine! And yeah, character development :3
Crit time!
You should have made it a little bit clearer that the action is happening at night, the only thing that made me catch on to that is that moon and the time on his watch (but that was at second read only) >__> and fix the speech bubbles where you can see the lineart underneath, just fill them with solid white or something.
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Yay crit time!
You're right, I should have at least rush jobbed that much last night >___>;;;. And I shall fix them! I was in too much of a rush to get this in last night...I shouldn't rush job but it's too much of a habit now ; n ;
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Heh it's fine, I know the feeling of wanting to upload something asap all too well, but I say if you do have time to fix things/ do them properly you should. Rush-jobbing things is a bad habit >__> I should know... I do that often ; n ;
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>__>; We both are in the same boat then :<
I need to slap myself to finish whatever entries I have with time and patience. Two things I somehow lack...
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