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Published: 2010-06-11 08:08:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 3234; Favourites: 74; Downloads: 127
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Another typography piece I made.I decided to make a clean one. No grunge and textures.
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I have this feeling inside me that its unfinished but I really dont know why.
Any suggestions.
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Took me the whole day to finish this.
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Everything here is composed of text except for the border and the rectangle in the letter "T".
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I read that some suggested a gradient as background β¦ But I think the white (or beige) background fits well! It shows typography in its cleanest and untouched way: on white paper. I donβt think that the white background bothers you β¦ I just can speak for me, but I think the problem is the typography you used. XD I know, not a nice hint of me. But let me explain: Though the typography fits very well inside the glas and also the glas I think, I have a problem with your writing there (Typography, the art of β¦). There the typography seems a little bit wrong. There it looks just too old and over-used (you know, everybody is using Times New Roman in Word XD), it just do not fit there for me. Also the spacing of the T the to the other words is not right β¦ There is just to much blank space between β¦ Maybe the T should be bigger so the rest of the text can come closer to the T? Just some suggestions. Maybe some of my tipps are useful. If not I am sorry for my long comment! 
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Have you arranged the letters manually or used some tool like Processing to make it automatically?
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Visually it is very nice, clean and balanced. May be the feeling of something wrong is because the big Y doesnt lead anywhere textually...You have two unrelated things here : a glass of water, and a sentence about typography.
Typography, for me, is the place where form and meaning unite. Not just a graphical game with letters.
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Thank you.
and thanks for the awesome fav.
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I think it's done. No need to change anything. Looks great!
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This fantastic piece has been included in Typographysical Appearance , a news article submitted on behalf of #Digiversity . If you have time, stop by, it's a very diverse compilation and I'm sure you'd find something to suit your taste.
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I think it's wonderful the way it is ! 
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Really nice work!
I love how you did water!^^
And I don't think it's unfinished, so keep quiet!
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Thanks. Some of the people think that too.
But its just a feeling.
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i think it's good but it just seems cliche. maybe try push the idea in a direction that isn't really taken.
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THats why I have this feeling its unfinished.
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well think of some thing unconventional in reference to water or some way you could push the idea of the glass or make the water flow from the glass in some creative way to show the prevalence, importance, expansiveness, etc of water in the world.
does that make sense?
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Wow. That got me thinking.
Just got an idea. Ill upload the new one when im finished.
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that's great. i'm glad i could help. send me a link when you upload it. i'd love to see it.
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Ok. But it will not be uploaded by this time. Class start tommorow for me so sorry for a very big delay.
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oh it's fine. i totally understand. just whenever you do. i'd like to see it.
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Yeah i'd suggest maybe dding a gradient too, try to work it, not sure i like the plain white background. Rest of it is stunning though.
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Thank you. Took me the whole day to arrange the letters.
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I can only imagine. You must have a lot of free time on your hands.
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Yeah todays my free day. Got exactly 3 days left for school to start and yeah. Making the best of time of what I have left.
And tried the gradients. Ruins the letters.
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That must suck, i start my summer holidays in 3 weeks, after the exams
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Lucky you.
When school starts itll be super busy. Maybe I can still make my typos but maybe 1-2 in a month.
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Yeah, that's how i've been for the past few months. Once I'm on holiday I'll have loads of free time, in between parties, of course!
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Wow. So gonna envy that. . lol.
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Nice.
maybe a radial gradient on the bg fills more? I dunno though
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Tried that. Doesnt fit.
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really nice! it looks clean and simple, and really eye catching
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another masterpiece from you! you're really creative and smart
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Wow. Thank you.
And for the watch and fav.
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sure, no problem. I just found myself excited for more entries from you
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