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Ressetkk — Black Tears by-nc-nd

Published: 2013-03-20 20:45:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 1114; Favourites: 44; Downloads: 27
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Description I'm a failure...
I'm nothing...
A monster among you...

I lost my eye, I made new one.
Days and nights without sleep,
Just for begin my new old life.

When all has been done the error has destroyed all,
deformed my face, betrayed by my family
I'm alone...

I fixed my face,
I tried to forget,
The pain has never gone...

Now again I'm alone.
Without anyone
My eye again cries...

I suck at poems D:

Here's my third OC, Failure. Well her name is actually Chell Volt, daughter of businessman and owner of equestira's electricity.
She's an biotechnology engineer working in Fillydelphia's hospital. Her passion is technology. So she made an eye implant which can work as an original one.

So much green.

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Comments: 6

MrSpanyard [2014-08-14 17:29:33 +0000 UTC]

Aww, I feel sad for her. She's not a monster, she's an angel!

What area of biotechnology is she specialiced into, please?

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markoatonc [2013-03-20 21:59:20 +0000 UTC]

hmmm nie masz tam błędu w opisie? mam namyśli oko będące "kimś" zamiast czymś. Pozatym to genialnie narysowane... I masz rację, wiersze zostaw innym.

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Ressetkk In reply to markoatonc [2013-03-20 22:15:50 +0000 UTC]

Wróć! Mea culpa. Mogłem się pomylić. Lecz można powiedzieć o tym oku, że to jest "ktoś" Za dużo do opowiadania

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Ressetkk In reply to markoatonc [2013-03-20 22:11:13 +0000 UTC]

Po 1sze chciałem pokrótce opisać historię mojej OCki w pierwszej osobie.
Po 2gie jest tutaj zastosowany taki środek stylistyczny jak ożywienie.

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Diebro210 [2013-03-20 21:32:10 +0000 UTC]

very nice

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Ressetkk In reply to Diebro210 [2013-03-20 21:38:37 +0000 UTC]

Thank you :3

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