Comments: 15
soup13 [2010-01-17 00:27:27 +0000 UTC]
when are you going to make the next link
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RetroOutro In reply to soup13 [2010-01-17 00:51:49 +0000 UTC]
Lolo when I upload the next page.
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xByDefault [2010-01-16 21:26:03 +0000 UTC]
I have to say, you're definitely getting better and better for each page and your story is interesting and entertaining(poor jack XP) Keep it up!
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RetroOutro In reply to xByDefault [2010-01-16 21:39:22 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! I am trying to put more effort into these pages now that people are reading them. I really appreciate you reading this far. Let me know if you ever have any suggestions. I have so much to learn.
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reva444 [2010-01-16 17:21:37 +0000 UTC]
Hehe XD They're funny together XD
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RetroOutro In reply to reva444 [2010-01-16 17:35:33 +0000 UTC]
I know right? XD
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captainq1632 [2010-01-16 15:33:28 +0000 UTC]
Agh, this breaks it up. I have to read this with the previous page...I can see the transition, but the innuendo feels jarring.
Meh, maybe it's just me.
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RetroOutro In reply to captainq1632 [2010-01-16 16:41:41 +0000 UTC]
The innuendo? Is it innuendo if one of the characters say it bluntly? Or do you mean something else?
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captainq1632 In reply to RetroOutro [2010-01-16 17:23:50 +0000 UTC]
Hah, you're right about that. It's too early.
but y'know what I mean I think.
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RetroOutro In reply to captainq1632 [2010-01-16 17:35:24 +0000 UTC]
I shouldn't split the joke across two pages?
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captainq1632 In reply to RetroOutro [2010-01-16 17:42:35 +0000 UTC]
Nah, it just felt abrupt to me to show up with something naughty. :s Like I said, it's probably just me.
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