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Published: 2016-02-18 21:42:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 1105; Favourites: 37; Downloads: 0
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Description Oh no. OoH-oh-oh-oh-oh-oh-oh-oh-oh no you won't. Oh Hell no. No. Just... Dammit. No.

Just finished reading Unrestedjade's new update on Flowey is not a good life coach. And damn, this fic. In a way I'm glad this torment will be over because the finale will be here soon. And at the same time I'm horrified. Terrified even, as I can't see any good outcome to this story. I've been thrown around by this fanfic and it seems like the end will just spiral me straight into turmoil.

I just HAD to doodle something after I (finally) read this whole horror through. I made a bigger version with Undyne and Alphys in it too, but I didn't have the patience to actually draw that yet. And I needed to get at least this wreck of bones out of my head before I could sleep. So here, have a brotherly mess of a Sans.

" The door swung open, banging against the wall.

A hush fell over the bar.

Silhouetted in the door frame, bits of straw stuck to his clothes and eye sockets shining over-bright and manic, was Sans. He was shivering hard enough to audibly rattle.

His gaze swept over the crowd and landed on Undyne and Alphys.

“Where is he?” "

I mean, damn. This scene made me so scared for fucking everything and everyone at the same time. Everything after this was just downhill and I wasn't even surprised by that. And still I had to take calming breaks every few minutes so I could dare to read forward. Unrestedjade is really fucking talented.

Flowey is not a good life coach: unrestedjade.tumblr.com/ (read here: archiveofourown.org/works/5056…)
Art by me.
Undertale & Sans: Toby Fox

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Comments: 24

SansAndPapyrusLOVE14 [2016-09-21 22:24:51 +0000 UTC]

OMFG I THOUGHT I WAS THE ONLY ONE WHO READ THE FANFICCCCCC O_O My favorite part (no idea wich chapter srry) is when flowey gets his hands on Sans and Papyrus, and papyrus (sorta) died?! Well, he was still alive BUT I WAS LIKE NOOOO NOT THE CINNAMON ROLLLLLL

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Retsilia In reply to SansAndPapyrusLOVE14 [2016-09-22 12:35:48 +0000 UTC]

FFFFF YES MORE FANS! <3 This story seems to have way too small fanbase, I wonder why since it's amazing!

Oh god that part is so terrible it's good my gosh I love that, the cinnamon roll ;;___;; My favorite chapter is 11, the one where Sans follows Paps in his training and their relationship starts to go downhill ;_; I should draw more for that!

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Moonlightmistborn [2016-04-26 04:14:53 +0000 UTC]

Oh god, at this part in the story, I was like -
"Oh, SNAP!"
This captures the expression perfectly. This is brilliant. Nice work!

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Retsilia In reply to Moonlightmistborn [2016-04-30 16:00:55 +0000 UTC]

Gosh, thank you! That was sweet of you to say >u<  

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X-I-L2048 [2016-04-23 05:49:49 +0000 UTC]

This was one of my favorite scenes from the whole fic, too. Great job wtih his expression!

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Retsilia In reply to X-I-L2048 [2016-04-25 16:05:07 +0000 UTC]

Thank you ^u^

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LadyKazoo [2016-02-28 08:15:53 +0000 UTC]

AHHHHHHHHHHHH. This may just be a doodle, but you did an amazing job with his expression! Gah, I can't wait for the update. I am in need of some justice for the skellybros.

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Retsilia In reply to LadyKazoo [2016-03-01 17:23:40 +0000 UTC]

AAAAAH thank you, you're so sweet ;_; <3 I'm seriously unsure with expressions so it's really nice to know it's okay ^u^ And I know that feeling! I can't really do an hour without checking this fic at least once hahahaha I'm pathetic XD

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LadyKazoo In reply to Retsilia [2016-03-03 00:39:53 +0000 UTC]

The fic is too good! So painfully good.

I've seen one or two other drawings of Sans in this scene, but I just think yours catches it well. Oh man, the thought of Sans freaking out when he realizes his brother could be in danger. The despair. The worry. The urgency. It hurts!

Anyway, I'll stop rambling. And you're welcome!

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Retsilia In reply to LadyKazoo [2016-03-03 17:47:31 +0000 UTC]

Oh gosh... Thank you, I'm flattered -*.*- So sweet of you to say that! I had a very similar thoughts when I read the part! This is just what flashed through my mind while reading -*__*- As a self-critical artist I have to say I did find some fanart that matches the feelings far more accurately, BUT I'm seriously flattered! Thank you again  

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LadyKazoo In reply to Retsilia [2016-03-04 01:27:10 +0000 UTC]

:3  You're very welcome!

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Suitov In reply to Retsilia [2016-03-01 20:17:05 +0000 UTC]

Considering his face doesn't give you much to work with, no muscles and fixed grin and all, you did an excellent job.

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Retsilia In reply to Suitov [2016-03-03 17:40:13 +0000 UTC]

Well yeah, considering all that XD Thanks!

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Suitov [2016-02-20 18:36:30 +0000 UTC]

Kick some petal, my sweet marshmallow.

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Retsilia In reply to Suitov [2016-02-22 17:17:35 +0000 UTC]

Damn straight!

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Dragoniangirl [2016-02-20 04:50:13 +0000 UTC]

This looks awesome! I agree, this part has got me so worried.

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Retsilia In reply to Dragoniangirl [2016-02-22 17:18:33 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! ^^ I'm so anxious... I can't wait ;_;

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BlazingCoral [2016-02-19 17:12:48 +0000 UTC]

Dude, fantastic take on this scene!

I have to admit this scene made me kindof scared but at the same time I was like "SANS IS FINALLY DOING SOMETHING HE REALIZED PAPYRUS IS BEING HURT AND HE'S DOING SOMETHING" so I'm both scared for him and happy?? Which is kindof how I feel about Papyrus at the end, too, though in both situations it's definitely more "scared" than happy... x____@;;;

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Retsilia In reply to BlazingCoral [2016-02-19 20:52:50 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha I know! But I'm really worried how Undyne and everyone at the bar will react ;;_;; I mean they have to believe him, right? Pap's in danger! I just can't deal, man. I just.... *cries* Btw, that Papyrus in the end was EPIC. I almost screamed when I realized that was the end ahahaha!.... Aaah the following weeks will be torture, right...

And thank you again! I have to finish that larger pic of this, this scene won't leave me alone! ><

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BlazingCoral In reply to Retsilia [2016-02-19 22:49:44 +0000 UTC]

I think he'll be all right--that one snowdrake is running to town, and she saw Flowey attack Papyrus, and that will be the proof that Papyrus is being hurt by someone. That, plus the "you're safe where you are" bit in Papyrus's voice message... I think that should prove it? Hopefully? @___@;;;

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okamiandlinklover [2016-02-19 06:51:23 +0000 UTC]

NICENICENICENICENICNIECNICENEC

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Retsilia In reply to okamiandlinklover [2016-02-19 12:51:59 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!   (It'll look nice once I clean this mess up haha)

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NamelessOkami [2016-02-19 06:47:41 +0000 UTC]

Oh yeah, that part... Awesome job! I love this!!!

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Retsilia In reply to NamelessOkami [2016-02-19 12:55:48 +0000 UTC]

Glad to hear that! I'm always very nervous with facial expressions and it's nice to see it was successful. Thank you!  

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