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Published: 2005-02-27 23:35:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 1081; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 138
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Description Just a short story I thought would go nicely with the pic....

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The three comets have finally arrived,......Arrived upon a world on the brink of destruction.

It has been so long that few remember how this bloody conflict really started. All they know is constant war and unending suffering. It is said that one day the fabled Three Comets of Ta’Riel will pass over the land and bring peace upon the inhabitants. They will remind the people of where they came from....how they started.

Legend states that in ancient days....over five thousand years ago, the three kingdoms of the planet Ta’Riel joined in a celebration of brotherhood. On this most joyous of nights the three kings called upon their most trusted wizards to create three comets to represent each kingdom. The three comets created through teamwork, understanding and love where to be sent on a visionary journey throughout the known universe.

They have finally returned...

The comet from the kingdom of Vallanor, embodied with the essence of teamwork, blessed the world with it’s eternal gift. Many smiled.....and realized that the best way to solve their problems was to work together.

The comet from the kingdom of Najjar, embodied with the essence of understanding, brought new light to a world covered with the darkness of ignorance. ...and a forgotten perception was given new hope.

The comet from the kingdom of Naviss, embodied with the essence of love, embraced the world with this long forgotten emotion...and as long time enemies looked at each other from across the battlefield, many dropped their weapons.

..For how can they fire upon their brothers.

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The mystic raven takes flight towards an unfamiliar night. A silent night no longer echoing with the sounds of a far away battle. A peaceful night no longer ravaged with the winds of hate. A wondrous night enchanted with the hope for a better tomorrow.

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sTock piCs taken from....

background......~ShallottStock
planet..............~ucd
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Comments: 44

purplerose [2009-08-27 06:28:35 +0000 UTC]

Well done.

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Rose-Of-Sharyn [2005-08-18 06:35:46 +0000 UTC]

NYAAAAAAAAAAA!!! Awesome picture & wonderful story!

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LatinMuffin [2005-06-28 10:23:59 +0000 UTC]

great little story!

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mizuhi [2005-03-08 14:34:31 +0000 UTC]

BRO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'M BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I MISSED YOU!!!

Awesome story, it's so deep and it fits the pic so well!!!!

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RevolverEcho In reply to mizuhi [2005-03-09 03:59:40 +0000 UTC]



thanks sis!.......glad you're back!

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mizuhi In reply to RevolverEcho [2005-03-09 10:14:45 +0000 UTC]

haha... Did you miss me????

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RevolverEcho In reply to mizuhi [2005-03-13 21:20:05 +0000 UTC]

of course i did silly

didn't think you'd come back

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mizuhi In reply to RevolverEcho [2005-03-14 07:03:01 +0000 UTC]

You didn't think I'd come back??!!!!! How could you ever think I'd just leave?!
I missed you too...

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lunalopus [2005-03-07 04:20:05 +0000 UTC]

It's beautiful and I love the story. Sometimes I think earth needs three comets...

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RevolverEcho In reply to lunalopus [2005-03-08 05:07:54 +0000 UTC]

i agree.......the sooner those three comets come the better

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Crisindra [2005-03-06 02:46:06 +0000 UTC]

wow finally read it... very.. deep.. and interesting... nice work

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Crisindra [2005-03-03 05:50:58 +0000 UTC]

gorgeous picture.... will take the time later to read the writing I swear.. skimmed it and it looks really good... but just can't deal with it right now.. too many words... will kill my brain cells! lol

but wonderful work of art... gorgeous!

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RevolverEcho In reply to Crisindra [2005-03-03 05:53:50 +0000 UTC]

lol

thanks Crys!


understood ...................go relax, syke yourself up and you can read later

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Crisindra In reply to RevolverEcho [2005-03-03 18:27:02 +0000 UTC]

no prob.. thanks for understanding!

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mysticshadow666 [2005-03-02 06:06:25 +0000 UTC]

Amazing. Luvjoi, you never cease to astound me.

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RevolverEcho In reply to mysticshadow666 [2005-03-02 18:57:34 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

i amaze myself all the time .........in a "how the hell did i do that?" way

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mysticshadow666 In reply to RevolverEcho [2005-03-02 20:56:28 +0000 UTC]

Nice. And luck isn't that persistant, you just have talent.

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RevolverEcho In reply to mysticshadow666 [2005-03-02 21:58:41 +0000 UTC]

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Melbel [2005-03-01 21:45:38 +0000 UTC]

this reminds me of The WAR OF WORLDS. I love this!!! *fav!*

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RevolverEcho In reply to Melbel [2005-03-01 23:19:06 +0000 UTC]

thanks Bel!


hope you're feeling better hunny bunny

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Melbel In reply to RevolverEcho [2005-03-02 02:23:20 +0000 UTC]

*flinches still coughing but manages a weak smile*

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RevolverEcho In reply to Melbel [2005-03-02 03:41:55 +0000 UTC]

awww...must be really bad

hope you come out of it soon

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Melbel In reply to RevolverEcho [2005-03-04 21:35:06 +0000 UTC]

Luv...JOI!!! *Singsong voice* I'M BAAAAACKKK!!! *Jaws Music* Dun dun dun dun duuuuuN! Oof! *lands on you* I feel better!!! Hola!!

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Melbel In reply to Melbel [2005-03-06 16:27:02 +0000 UTC]

You're a great friend-my amigo!!

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RevolverEcho In reply to Melbel [2005-03-05 21:40:45 +0000 UTC]

LOL

welocome back Bel!!


about time you feel better

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Hullek [2005-02-28 16:32:15 +0000 UTC]

Nice. As ussual a great SCI-FI piece Great job man.

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RevolverEcho In reply to Hullek [2005-03-01 06:57:49 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

story coming to a local bookstore near you

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WickedNox [2005-02-28 15:24:46 +0000 UTC]

stunning my dear

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RevolverEcho In reply to WickedNox [2005-03-01 06:53:53 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much

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hereticschizoid [2005-02-28 12:57:35 +0000 UTC]

The deep blue colour is perfect, as always you make it look like a painting It's also nice how the twinkling star in the top right corner overlaps the black border. I like the angle as well. And the shadow and colouring that makes it look so realistic.

Beautiful as always.

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RevolverEcho In reply to hereticschizoid [2005-03-01 00:54:22 +0000 UTC]

thanks D!

i'm glad you liked the twinkling star on the right ..............it was a last minute addition

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Heidi-V-Art [2005-02-28 07:56:35 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful angle, I like the way everything tilts to the side! The different shades of blue look so nice and I like the sparkles!

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RevolverEcho In reply to Heidi-V-Art [2005-02-28 18:09:25 +0000 UTC]

thanks so much beautiful lady

a "different" angle was the first thing i wanted to do when i started this

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Shadowstarflame [2005-02-28 05:44:31 +0000 UTC]

The story really goes well with the picture.Yet its the picture which draws the emotive. The deep colors are really beautiful I like the way the comets go across this piece looks very good. good job luv ^-^

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RevolverEcho In reply to Shadowstarflame [2005-02-28 18:07:15 +0000 UTC]

thanks so much muh luvly fwiend!

you always give excellent critiques

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Shadowstarflame In reply to RevolverEcho [2005-03-01 00:50:23 +0000 UTC]

Your Welcomes ^.^

I'm glad I am of good use ^.^

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aleharo [2005-02-28 02:34:31 +0000 UTC]

heyy le falta la rosa..

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RevolverEcho In reply to aleharo [2005-02-28 04:47:01 +0000 UTC]

quieres ver una rosa?..........................aqui esta [link]

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pearwood [2005-02-28 01:28:54 +0000 UTC]

Beautifully executed, with the bright lights against the dark background. The raven against the planet and the tree in fhe foreground bring it closer to home. With just the planet and comets and stars in the dark sky the picture would have been rather sterile and distant.
Steve

He will judge between the nations and will settle disputes for many peoples.
They will beat their swords into plowshares and their spears into pruning hooks.
Nation will not take up sword against nation, nor will they train for war anymore.

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RevolverEcho In reply to pearwood [2005-02-28 04:42:54 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

yes...everything was strategically placed


i loved those words you placed

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darkmoon3636 [2005-02-28 00:58:52 +0000 UTC]

ooh! beautiful combination. That shade of blue goes very good with the planet And the three comets are awesome too.

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RevolverEcho In reply to darkmoon3636 [2005-02-28 04:20:02 +0000 UTC]

thanks homey!............peace out

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Ohno-moment [2005-02-28 00:38:32 +0000 UTC]

So the planet became re-enlightened?

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RevolverEcho In reply to Ohno-moment [2005-02-28 04:15:06 +0000 UTC]

yes........just your typical fairy tale with a happy ending but a hidden message is oh so cleverly laced into the story story.

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