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p0rphyrogene [2010-01-11 19:08:00 +0000 UTC]

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact


Usually street shots happen to be spontaneous things, and thus there's often a certain chaotic element to them. Personally, I'm not a street photographer, I do things the slow way; which is why I chose to do a critique on this piece.

The first thing that struck me about this picture (and what made me look into it instead of skipping it) is that it seems to be carefully composed. This might be actual planning or coincidence, only the photographer could tell, but the effect is the same. This shot works very well from the standpoint of, say, a landscape photographer. The composition is spot on; it's strongly centralized (with the cyclist as focal point), has leading lines (the one on the pavement and the streetlights above), and there's a nice symmetry to it.

Nevertheless, it also works well as a classical street shot, naturally. It captures people "in the moment", as with the two men at the right having a conversation, contrasted with the people at the left, sitting by themselves.

There isn't so much to say about the technique part of it; it's a typical toned black and white and works well in that regard. Personally, I don't really see the point of the glowing colored advert at the center top (seems a bit distracting), but that's about the only "con" I can think of.

All in all, a street shot that is more than just "street".

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reza67 In reply to p0rphyrogene [2010-01-21 13:29:57 +0000 UTC]

hey man
thank you very much for the critigue

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thedaydreaminggirl [2010-03-14 10:34:14 +0000 UTC]

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(please fav the news article to get more attention )

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Sepinik [2009-12-06 01:13:12 +0000 UTC]

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reza67 In reply to Sepinik [2009-12-06 12:40:04 +0000 UTC]

merci merci spideh

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M-H-S [2009-11-27 21:21:17 +0000 UTC]

nice shot

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shayan-phototaker [2009-11-27 21:09:25 +0000 UTC]

eyval kare kheili ghashangie
damet garm...axa kuchulu shod

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reza67 In reply to shayan-phototaker [2009-12-02 22:07:52 +0000 UTC]

mokhlesim faghat bekhatere rooye gole ishoon

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shayan-phototaker In reply to reza67 [2009-12-19 15:36:15 +0000 UTC]

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