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Description Grrr, my scanner messed this up so bad.

Anyway, at long last, here it is. My deviantID. Overall, I'm pleased with it. I especially love the shading in Leah the Treecko's tail. There were a few issues, though. Human Leah's feet look a bit off because I tried drawing an awkward pose (I'm terrible at drawing feet, anyway), and I'm not sure if I got Treecko Leah's mouth right. I don't know where those black dots on the right came from - they're nowhere to be found on the actual picture. And to the left of the characters, you can see where I messed up on something and erased it. (I probably just shot myself in the foot saying this. ) I was going to include some Unown writing, but it ended up looking way too messy, so I scrapped it. And since I have a tendency to draw hard... it left an imprint.

But enough of me criticizing my own work. I'm just glad it's done. And, yes, the background is her aura - brilliant green. I just hope the color doesn't look as off on your computer as it does on my laptop - it looked great on my parents' computer when I scanned it.

Oh, and in case you're curious, the medium is Roseart colored pencils.

I've talked enough. Enjoy, and feel free to comment and critique away.
~ Rhaeda

EDIT: I had to crop the background, since the full-sized image was cut off on my profile.
EDIT 2.0: I shrank it a bit again, since it was still a little too big for my liking.

Treecko © Nintendo, The Pokémon Company, etc.
Leah © me.
Artwork © me.
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Comments: 73

RhaedaLeeMire In reply to ??? [2010-11-28 00:42:53 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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NarryEevee In reply to RhaedaLeeMire [2010-11-28 15:43:04 +0000 UTC]

Do not mention it
I think its pretty cool drawings ^ ^

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RhaedaLeeMire In reply to NarryEevee [2010-11-29 05:11:35 +0000 UTC]

Glad to hear it.

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NarryEevee In reply to RhaedaLeeMire [2010-11-29 17:47:06 +0000 UTC]

is true ^ ^

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Darks-Sparkles [2010-06-01 09:54:40 +0000 UTC]

LOL!!! that is so cute :3

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RhaedaLeeMire In reply to Darks-Sparkles [2010-06-08 06:54:52 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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knuxrocks28 [2010-03-28 17:10:21 +0000 UTC]

So cool!^-^

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RhaedaLeeMire In reply to knuxrocks28 [2010-03-28 21:30:42 +0000 UTC]

Aw, thanks! ^_^

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Bjarru [2010-03-23 12:26:41 +0000 UTC]

Epic! I love her poses

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RhaedaLeeMire In reply to Bjarru [2010-03-28 21:30:52 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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xxxLatiasxxx [2009-11-30 04:01:46 +0000 UTC]

You did a really good job on this picture.

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RhaedaLeeMire In reply to xxxLatiasxxx [2009-11-30 04:03:57 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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xxxLatiasxxx In reply to RhaedaLeeMire [2009-11-30 04:05:15 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome.

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Super-Skitty [2009-11-24 13:12:37 +0000 UTC]

Wow! You're developing your own style already. I knew this was yours without reading.

What I love most is how all the colours contrast, it grabbed my attention quickly. Also, how you sized the characters accordingly, it is most effective! It'll look fantastic on your webpage!

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RhaedaLeeMire In reply to Super-Skitty [2009-11-24 17:48:24 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha, awesome! Then that means it's all worthwhile. Thanks so much!

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Super-Skitty In reply to RhaedaLeeMire [2009-11-25 15:30:52 +0000 UTC]

Indeed it be!
You're so incredibly extremely epicly welcome!

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RhaedaLeeMire In reply to Super-Skitty [2009-11-25 18:50:43 +0000 UTC]

Yay!
(Lol, and I've never even had Red Bull in my life.)

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Porridges [2009-11-24 07:11:13 +0000 UTC]

Hehe, this is great! I love the poses, you seem to be developing your own style already Nice job! x3

And yep, the background looks fine in my opinion, or on this computer, at least Heh, my aura was a firey red...just what I wanted~ >D

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RhaedaLeeMire In reply to Porridges [2009-11-24 07:16:14 +0000 UTC]

Aww, thanks! And I'm glad you think so!

Cool!

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Sanngot [2009-11-23 22:48:16 +0000 UTC]

I love the colouring you did! I always mess up when drawing with pencil crayon. That's why I do all my colouring on the computer.

Very nice ID pick. I have yet to get around to making mine... So many ideas and so little time to draw them. I wish I was a faster artist...

Anyway, a little on the critical side here. Hair on Leah seems a bit poofy. Dunno if it was supposed to be that way but I just thought I'd mention it. Treecko Leah seems a bit scrawny too. Other than that it's great though!

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RhaedaLeeMire In reply to Sanngot [2009-11-24 04:34:26 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the comments and your critique - I really appreciate them! These were issues I noticed while I was drawing, as well, and it's helpful to know that I'm not the only one who formed these impressions. And I'm still working to develop a personal style, especially when it comes to drawing Pokémon.

Good luck working on your own ID and other pictures. I understand what you mean - it took me a while to get this done, too. But you'll get it all finished eventually, so don't give up.

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Sanngot In reply to RhaedaLeeMire [2009-11-24 20:56:50 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I'll probably have to wait till the end of exams to do that. I have quite a list of stuff I want to do by then. I want to make a picture for my fic so I can start posting my fic here. I want to make my Deviant ID. I essentially have a big list of other things I want to do. I also want to get back to working on my fanfics. That's right, I'm working on 2. One I am in the process of posting and the other is a colab with a friend that is still in production. @_@

Some people say they have artists block. Well it's the opposite for me. I have artists overload... D=

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RhaedaLeeMire In reply to Sanngot [2009-11-25 05:36:07 +0000 UTC]

Oh, wow, that is a lot. O_o It's good to know that I'm not the only one with a bunch of different projects on my plate - and yes, artist's overload can be quite deadly. I'm becoming overwhelmed by everything I want to do, and the constant influx of Deviations in my inbox doesn't help matters, either. But it's all good - I'll get to everything eventually, and I'm sure you will, too.

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Sanngot In reply to RhaedaLeeMire [2009-11-25 13:17:25 +0000 UTC]

Yep... I think I'll need to make a list of my ideas so I don't forget...

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RhaedaLeeMire In reply to Sanngot [2009-11-25 16:59:39 +0000 UTC]

That's probably a good idea.

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squizel [2009-11-23 19:05:31 +0000 UTC]

It's looks really good! I love the fact they have matching poses, adds to the epicness of it! Your Treecko is really good, and so'd=s Human Leah, can't wait for chapter 3!

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RhaedaLeeMire In reply to squizel [2009-11-24 00:55:57 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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squizel In reply to RhaedaLeeMire [2009-11-24 16:29:13 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome!

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pynni [2009-11-22 16:26:12 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful job on the coloring!

Fave'd.

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RhaedaLeeMire In reply to pynni [2009-11-23 02:23:51 +0000 UTC]

Woohoo! Thanks!

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Shining-Aura [2009-11-22 07:00:10 +0000 UTC]

That looks cool anyway I got PMD sky and got Vulpix on my first try yay I answered trufully too.

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RhaedaLeeMire In reply to Shining-Aura [2009-11-22 07:07:21 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

Awesome! I love it when it works out that way. I got Treecko and the brilliant green aura in Time on my first try - answering truthfully, as well.

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PokreatiaForms [2009-11-22 05:53:58 +0000 UTC]

Ah, this is indeed quite a nice piece! It turned out very nicely~ 8D

And the background does seem a lot more like yellow than green. The work of the scanner, I take it? owo;

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RhaedaLeeMire In reply to PokreatiaForms [2009-11-22 05:59:23 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

Yeah, it was the scanner. It's green on paper, I can tell you that. And it looked fine on my parents' computer, but when I brought it over to mine... Eh, I guess it depends on the different computers' color schemes.

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PokreatiaForms In reply to RhaedaLeeMire [2009-11-22 06:23:54 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome~

I guess so. <|D;

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WOOP-DE-DE-DOO [2009-11-22 05:34:28 +0000 UTC]

FREAKING EPIC.
No, seriously, this is really, really great.
If I could faveorite this ten million times, I would.

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RhaedaLeeMire In reply to WOOP-DE-DE-DOO [2009-11-22 05:37:01 +0000 UTC]

Daaaw, I just squeed so loud! Thank you, my sister!

Oooh, I just noticed Escapists Chapter 10 is up! *dashes off to read it*

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WOOP-DE-DE-DOO In reply to RhaedaLeeMire [2009-11-22 05:39:52 +0000 UTC]

'Welcome! ^-^
YES! I've been neglecting the readers. XD

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RhaedaLeeMire In reply to WOOP-DE-DE-DOO [2009-11-22 05:54:53 +0000 UTC]

Lol, it has been a while since you updated it. But I can understand - I still haven't even started Chapter 3 of TMRC yet.

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WOOP-DE-DE-DOO In reply to RhaedaLeeMire [2009-11-22 05:57:16 +0000 UTC]

I know, it takes me a while. x3
That's okay! xD

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RhaedaLeeMire In reply to WOOP-DE-DE-DOO [2009-11-22 06:02:43 +0000 UTC]

Yep.

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Piplup-fangirl66 [2009-11-22 00:52:48 +0000 UTC]

XD it's a pretty good ID.

Yeah... scanners can be annoying sometimes.

I have a tip: preview the image a few times on the scanner and play with the brightness and colour settings a little. It's time-consuming but it works. (:

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RhaedaLeeMire In reply to Piplup-fangirl66 [2009-11-22 01:01:42 +0000 UTC]

I knew there was something I forgot to mention in my artist's comments! Yeah, I actually did fiddle around with the settings quite a bit. It looks better than it did when it first came up on the computer, but still...

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Fischy-Kari-chan [2009-11-21 22:33:09 +0000 UTC]

There it is
I never got green for my aura, only red and blue I even thought there aren't any other colors available, well nevermind, lets come to the pic:
You're really great with coloring, and the shadows and the light are so good
I think it was a good decision to make the background with Leahs aura couse that make the whole pic, erm, how could I say this? Maybe like this: This way the whole pic comes from the story and is important, not only the figures. If you had made the background with something random then only Leah would be important and the background would just be 'something that is also in the picture' but so everything is important!
I hope this makes sense, and only for the protocol: I couldn't even explain this in german, this is one of the things that are clearly in my head but which I could never explain to another person.

And a stupid question (again):
She is a human who lives in the paralyzed future world of PMD, she lives hide in a cave with a nido famaly who found her when she was a baby. So, where the hell did she get normal humen clothes? And a hair band?

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RhaedaLeeMire In reply to Fischy-Kari-chan [2009-11-22 01:12:08 +0000 UTC]

Aw, thanks! And don't worry - I understood what you meant.

The reason you're only getting two colors is because the game chooses your aura based on the color you chose for your DS's background on the start-up screen, if that makes sense. It picks from the closest matching color and it's inverted color. I chose pink, so 75% of the time, I wind up with an uplifting pink, and 25% of the time I get brilliant green (the inverted color.)

That's not a stupid question at all - I had a feeling someone would ask eventually, and I've been trying to come up with a plausible reason for a while now. I would think, though, that either the Nidos had found some clothes somewhere and made a storage for when Leah grew, or someone who has been helping their family found them. Probably the latter. It's still a detail I'm trying to fine-tune, though.

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Fischy-Kari-chan In reply to RhaedaLeeMire [2009-11-22 13:51:32 +0000 UTC]

Oh I never heard that that it choose from the background color but that makes sense, thanks *'s you back*

Ah I see, you really make a plausible reason for everything, don't you? But that's good this way, many people just say "Shut up, it will be like this no matter whether it makes sense or not"

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RhaedaLeeMire In reply to Fischy-Kari-chan [2009-11-23 04:27:15 +0000 UTC]

Yep! *gives you another , just because*

Lol, yeah, I guess. It's something my creative writing teachers have suggested that we work on, and it's something I need to practice for when I actually get ready to write a novel of publishable quality. And I agree - it's hardly fair for the author/artist to be that closed-minded about their work and the feedback they receive, both to their audience and to themselves. That's why I always try to be as open as I can to my readers and the feedback I receive. I'm growing every time I write something new, and you people help me with it.

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Fischy-Kari-chan In reply to RhaedaLeeMire [2009-11-23 16:24:11 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I also love feedback especially positive one

Often I just read "Wow this is great, hope you'll post the next chapter soon" and this is all. Many people are really not able to articulate what they like about my storys and what I could change, it's annoying
I personally think about myself as a good critic, I always go into detail what I like and what could be changed but people who just say "keep it up" make me like this:

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RhaedaLeeMire In reply to Fischy-Kari-chan [2009-11-24 02:48:16 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha, yeah, I understand. I'm exactly the same way as you in my creative writing classes - I go into a lot of detail. Here, though, it's a bit harder - I have so many Devis coming in from so many different places that I'm not always able to critique as in-depth as I'd like to. Plus, it's harder critiquing someone online than it is face-to-face in the classroom - you have no idea how the person behind the other computer is going to react, and sometimes you have no idea how much they get out of your comments.

But I think you do a great job critiquing, too - for all of the reasons you mentioned. There are two people on here who do that for me on a regular basis, and you're one of them.

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Fischy-Kari-chan In reply to RhaedaLeeMire [2009-11-24 15:30:26 +0000 UTC]

Yeah this also makes me worrying a lot. I'm always afraid of insult people by saying something wrong. If you face the person you're talk to you can read his thoughts in his face (I'm really good at this , but at the PC you really have no clue about what the other is thinking.

Glad to hear that, I always take my time and analyze exactly when I write a comment, not only at your stuff, at anyone alse, too
I could ask who this other person is just because I'm naturally curious but I guess you'll hide his identity

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