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RhaedaLeeMire — Private Spheres
Published: 2010-03-25 06:42:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 212; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 2
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Description Warm scents of coffee and hot chocolate
invite the studious in for a break.
Lines fill and customers file
into tables with comforting purchases.
The drone of chatter that condenses like a fog
threatens to distract the unwary mind.

Lighting lanterns against the haze of chaos,
students form private bubbles of light
the way a writer reaches into the swirling darkness
that shelters the sacred garden of her imagination
and pulls out a golden strand of light
to fit into her pen and establish her own order.
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Super-Skitty [2010-03-25 16:17:26 +0000 UTC]

Wow. Even the everyday situation of a cafe can be made beautiful when described in this way. Very well done, I like it.

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RhaedaLeeMire In reply to Super-Skitty [2010-03-26 04:13:50 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! And I'm glad I was able to make it so.

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