Comments: 10
Hellknight1000 [2009-04-20 14:44:36 +0000 UTC]
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I'm goin' all out! e.deviantart.com/emoticons/n/n⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="" title="Noes!" />
Probably one of your best yet. Very well done. e.deviantart.com/emoticons/s/s⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)" />
The detail is great, as well as the coloring and shading. The warm colors used for shading works very well with the flames. Background is nice, highlights look good, and the wings are great @_@. The colors "peeling" off of him look really cool too. e.deviantart.com/emoticons/e/e⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Eek)" />
The pose could use a little bit of work. You could probably give off a better sense of "falling" if you positioned the legs differently. The way they are positioned now, it can be difficult to determine whether the silhouette is floating or standing on solid ground.
And I'm not sure what's going on with the flames below him. They're obviously there, but I don't see it's purpose. He's falling and heating up, but all of the flames below him, to me, lack a sense of movement, and seem more like there's a still object below him that we can't see, that's simply on fire. e.deviantart.com/emoticons/h/h⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="" title="hmm" /> The flames and whatnot around the figure look great though.
Overall, I really really like it. All your efforts surely paid off, and you're definitely improving. e.deviantart.com/emoticons/b/b⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Big Grin)" />
(Oh and by the way: Master Chief. I before E except after C. e.deviantart.com/emoticons/let⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Lick)" /> Lol.)
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Cysanic5 [2009-04-20 15:33:53 +0000 UTC]
Absolute awesomeness, I love how you've captured the intensity of speed and the heat! I also love the way the armour is melting and peeling off!
This was so worth the wait, you've outdone yourself!
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Cysanic5 In reply to Rhunyc [2009-04-20 18:23:58 +0000 UTC]
Wow, I hate to say it, but this seems better then the other one. the planet seems to draw the eye from the bottom of the pic, unlike the other, which the flames dominated XD but this is still awesome.
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