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Moghendhim [2009-06-30 14:31:39 +0000 UTC]
The colour's much better than in the first one, but you've kind of damaged the shape of her face. She's got the facial structure of a fat girl, now, and it doesn't carry into her shoulders.
I wish I could point and say "this is why", but I suspect it's in the shading. The lightness under the chin is too bright, and makes it look bulging -- that much is certain. And I think the cheeks may be shaded too roundly and too low, but I also might be talking out my ass.
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RhyssaFireheart In reply to Moghendhim [2009-07-02 00:06:23 +0000 UTC]
Hmm, not sure I agree on the "facial structure of a fat girl" part, but I can agree on the cheeks maybe being shaded too roundly though. In fact, I narrowed the face slightly from the photo reference, at least on the right side of her face, although I didn't shade the left side to make it more defined. And yeah, the area under the chin is probably a bit too bright, now that I'm done with it and looking after a break.
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