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Riccardo80 [2010-03-19 20:07:53 +0000 UTC]
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ChamplooNinja [2009-08-01 15:59:55 +0000 UTC]
Since I'm not a paying member of DA I can't write a formal critique but... Since I've been watching you on DA for a long time, I'll give you a mini-critique! XD I love the lines in this drawing, and I think you did a fabulous job on the background. There are just two things in this that bug my eye a little, and thats that the book that she is reading, where her arm goes over top of the book, it looks like you should be able to see the edges of the book on the other side of her arm... And he clothes don't match this atmosphere for me... Im not sure why, but it just seems like she's just chilling at home in her night shirt or something. But over all I love this and I think it's one of my favorite drawings of Ariel. ^_^
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ChamplooNinja In reply to richten [2009-08-04 01:12:47 +0000 UTC]
lol... Your welecome... And yeah, I know what you mean about the book.. I do things like that all the time, and once that empty space is there, it seems impossible to fill in. I wonder why that is? o.0 Oh well, It's a great drawing, and the coloring you did is great too! XD Hope to see more from you soon!
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