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Ricku In reply to SabrinaEspeon [2016-03-16 15:37:25 +0000 UTC]
You have no idea how happy your comment made me. ;__; (Or critique, anyway, haha~)
I've never been too good at writing creepy stories and this was never really intended to be a creepypasta per se, only a story inspired by those. I'm very happy you managed to enjoy the story for what it was. I hope it wasn't TOO cliche, although I know it held a lot of those when it comes to these types of stories... :'D
It's amazing to hear people compliment my writing skills, since in the past, I was really critiqued for not being able to write anything interesting and that I lacked imagination. :'3 I'm glad that has somewhat changed~
Thank you EVER so much for giving me such kind feedback! Five stars on everything? You are way too generous, but it certainly cheered me up. :3 Made me a little inspired to finish writing one of my longer creepy stories...~
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ScyphozoanPrincess [2018-01-04 08:39:01 +0000 UTC]
This was heart-wrenching, but I'm glad it ended happily. Well done!
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midna5443 [2017-03-03 23:23:51 +0000 UTC]
I want this to have a sequel from this. ^^
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Ricku In reply to midna5443 [2017-03-04 17:39:29 +0000 UTC]
It probably wouldn't be any good, though, if I wrote one... XD
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midna5443 [2017-03-02 20:28:30 +0000 UTC]
That was a good story. I loved it so much and it almost made me tear up. Amazing work my friend. I can't wait to see more like this from you in the future.
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midna5443 In reply to Ricku [2017-03-03 22:33:39 +0000 UTC]
Mhm. *gives you a great big hug*
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wtf16 [2017-01-29 14:53:30 +0000 UTC]
wow I just logged into my account after about 5 years just to read this again and I still love it <3
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Ricku In reply to wtf16 [2017-02-16 20:07:06 +0000 UTC]
Oh my God, I wrote this story in 2011. WHERE DID THE TIME GO?! XD
Nevertheless, I'm glad it still manages to please you. :'D It makes me happy I'm not the worst writer ever, haha~
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The-Mind-District [2015-08-04 17:47:03 +0000 UTC]
Nice story very creepy and a interesting plot, but one question why did the tenth owner tell her to remember she was the eleventh ?
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The-Mind-District In reply to Ricku [2015-08-05 23:06:09 +0000 UTC]
No worries, from what I got he knew that the eevee was planning revenge on the abusive trainers but was just waiting to find a caring one first, but if that was it I was confused why the man wasn't expecting it later. but anyway I really liked the story its nice to find a horror story on the internet that isn't technically a creepypasta.
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Ricku In reply to The-Mind-District [2015-10-16 23:17:50 +0000 UTC]
I guess the man was just stupid, much like I tend to be, haha. XD
I'm glad you enjoyed it nevertheless~ I'm not good at writing horror stories (not to mention Creepypastas, oy...), so it means a lot to get feedback on it. :'3
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MrWheatly [2015-02-21 07:32:44 +0000 UTC]
I hope it's okay I comment on this older post! I had a great time reading this, at time I didn't know how to feel about it all! And that means that the story worked and could do something to me inside :'D you're good at this ^^ is writing in past tense a favorite of yours? It works pretty well :3
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superlinda12 [2013-12-19 23:26:58 +0000 UTC]
That is not a creepypasta in my opinion , but a lovely story of revenge , sadness and love , the love of a pokemon for the only trainer who ever gave it attention , there are no existence words for what i tought of your story , but all i have to say is that it was such an awesome work , congratulations
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Ricku In reply to INTJay0724 [2013-11-30 21:42:47 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! :'3 I try.
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INTJay0724 In reply to Ricku [2013-12-01 17:55:37 +0000 UTC]
Yeah Its great!
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powerofmu [2013-07-30 19:38:39 +0000 UTC]
cool
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powerofmu In reply to Ricku [2013-08-08 13:53:07 +0000 UTC]
your welcome
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jigsawjam [2013-06-19 17:15:43 +0000 UTC]
I love this!
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8Darkness-Seeker8 [2013-06-06 04:49:52 +0000 UTC]
I liked that the main character was nice! it was....kinda cute, I LOVE IT!
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adraenohmygosh [2013-05-04 22:26:26 +0000 UTC]
This was beautiful ;u;
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No1fan15 [2013-04-11 14:39:30 +0000 UTC]
Awesome! I love creepyon!!
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XxMaximumRide14xX [2012-11-29 22:25:42 +0000 UTC]
This was so cute o3o You should write more like this.!! o3o ♥
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XxMaximumRide14xX In reply to Ricku [2012-12-06 22:13:31 +0000 UTC]
Omg those were amazing! They were absolutely lovely! You write amazing stories! Can't wait to read more! o3o
They have no Espeon! *Gasps* Nuhhh!
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