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RickWhitetiger β The Ballad of Billy: Page 1.
Published: 2017-04-21 10:20:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 702; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 0
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Holy sh*t it's finally here! The so long awaited PAGE MOTHERF*CKING UNO! And i think it's not even that good... but deep inside i know it's good enough, tell me what you guys think.I used Paint Tool SAI for the pannels, and MS Paint for the texts... Cause we all know that MS Paint>Photoshop.
Also, on that pannel with the 2 Billies fighting... guess whose Billy's dad?
I hope this is readable.
And i hope you like it!
If this page gets enough support imma start making page 2 right now! ... or... then... idk whatever.
I also don't know how to categorize this, so for now it's gonna be good old Digital Art / Drawings & Paintings / Animals.
Cameos: Behemoth, by , Thyrvon by and Collard Xenoceropts by
PS: The predators weren't even hungry lol, that's why i think this first page is bad, that scene kinda felt forced... i'm not good at making comics lol
But hey, i guess when you're a Billy, and you're a prey item, you gotta run no matter if a predator's hungry or not.Previous: Cover.
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Glad you like it so far and it's only the first page! It get's even better from here on out!
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Okay, I'll check it out! Maybe I can try to make a creature for it? Idk, but I will definitely read it!
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Sure you can make a creature for the comic, go ahead.
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Just be sure to mention me if you ever upload it.
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YUS AND PAGE TOO WILL BE UPLOADED....
RIGHT NOW!
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It was here since April 21th, and the 2nd page will be uploaded soon... with soon i mean like... at 18:50 or something...
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Yeah I've been on a field trip to Wales(ish) for a week and I just got back, what a surprise to come back to! Ooh looking forward to it...
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Oh wow, hope you had a great trip!
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Thanks, I did! I found loads of trilobites.
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YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Β Β Β
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YAY INDEED! REJOICE!
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Other than the randomness, what did you think of this page? Also guess what? Page 2 is gonna be uploaded in a few hours! (i hope, if not, then maybe tomorrow.)
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It's amazing! The art is beautiful!
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Aw, thanks!
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No problem!
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I will
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Β indeed.
Other than that, your overall thoughts in words and not emoticons?
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All in all, The first strip is pretty great thus far. I mean you established his world both fluently and quickly, you made him somewhat simple-minded yet humbly aware of his surroundings(as would be for most animals, especially coastal species), and you even added a few cameos for the daily routines of his species and other fauna(possibly foreshadowing for some of them
Great job in the end Rickie!
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Thanks a lot! And the comedic timings thing... i really don't know, i guess they're kinda randomΒ Β―\_(γ)_/Β―
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Random would probably work best here
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Yaaaaay! Se ve espectacular, felicidades! Y es solo la primera pagina, no puedo esperar a ver las siguientes
Ademas, me encanta el Behemoth de atras, justo como imagine que se veria en la realidad
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Gracias!
Y denada! Me alegro que te haya gustado el diseΓ±o del Behemoth!
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This is looking good so far! But DAMN, didn't realize that bulls would be so aggressive! Then again, their closest relative IS the elephant seal.
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Yeh!
Speaking about bulls, guess whose Billy's dad? It's quite obvious lol.
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My dad was a big guy too. I stopped visiting him when he lied to me about his tiny chihuahua pup who loved me being with her mom for a little, but in reality he sold her. how long did he keep up the lie? FOR. THREE. WEEKS.
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Oh, well, that's sad
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Anyways, after contemplating that depressing moment, I wonder three things:
1: Do male and female Billies differ in coloration, as well as size?
2: Does this comic have a plot, besides a lil' Billy cub exploring the island?
3: Will Stevens (Renamed the squeaker) appear in the next page?
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A1: Yes, they differ in size, but colorations vary in age. The older a billy, the darker it's fur, the younger a Billy, the clearer it is.
A2: Also No, it's not gonna be only around the Billy (that we all know and love... like... remember the first picture i uploaded of him? rickwhitetiger.deviantart.com/β¦ that one. Man, he has he changed a lot since that goofy little sketch
A3: Yes, they will
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Sooo... your thoughts?
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But i mean something like a critique!Β Β
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wow. I'm no judge.
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Lol i was joking lol chill.
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