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Published: 2009-05-08 00:52:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 762; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 9
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Description ric was walking in a meadow minding his own business just to be free and roam. "hmm i wonder what should i do now." walks on to a really big hill and runs to the top.
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"whats that down thier?" looking down from the hill was a small building that looked new but abondoned (part of ric's personalty is curiosity and has alot of it) so he goes down toward the factory building and noticed the doors and entrance were blocked off and looked around. then went the backway to see if thier was a backdoor. to his suprise thier was none (lol got you!) so he thought he'd make his own entrance thru the wall and started to pull out his sword. but was suddenly stoped by a sound behind him.
he jumped out of the way of a army knife.
what seemed to be the leader of this pack of soldeirs was a rat. "oh wow your a fast one arent you! anyways this place here is restiricted and im going to have to ask you to leave" "i dont see no marking of this building belonging to the military or any goverment group and judging by how this building was built and the way your dressed and the blood on that armor your soldiers are wearing. im guessing your a anti-goverment group or and undercover group doing illelgal things" the leader gets angry and barks back "AND WHAT IS IT TO YOU! YOU DONT KNOW WHo WE ARE!" pauses for a moment and calms down "but you are smart young lad. you dont happen to work with the goverment do you?" "no im not with anybody im just a traveler" "ahh well then your no use to us. troops kill HIM NOW!"
the gaurds lift up thier guns toward ric and start open fire
ric leaps out of the way of the bullets into the air
comes back toward the ground and starts to run toward the gaurds while they keep firing "man this dude is fast!"
already reaching the gaurds he starts to hit them in the stomach and head and legs with his fist feet and elbow
in a few seconds the gaurds fall to the ground some uncatious and some dead
the leader struck in horror falls to the ground "who... who the hell ARE YOU!!" ric walks up as the leader backs away as much as possible. "im ... a nobody who does good for nothing!" knocks the leader out with one fist.
"phew now its time to see whats in this building that you guys were hiding"
so he cuts thru the wall with the blade and walks in
as soon as he walks in he notices that the building is filled with tubes that seemed to hold anytype of species and looks around to control panels and test tubes around and the most noticable thing was a really big tube with what seemed to have something in it that seemed larger then him "huh whats that?" not realizing that one of the guards was still awake "erhhh we must not let all are work be discovered or destroyed! i have to save it!" pulls out a button out of his leg pocket and presses it.
the building starts to shake and rumble
"what the he..."
looks back to the tube and it burst open but to full with smoke to see what had emeraged from it and a few seconds later the building lit fire in one part and then ...
KABOOM! it explodes into rumble and peices the dead bodies flew away and the uncious ones became dead and blew away too
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few hours later ric appears from the rumble and dust himself off "... god dam that hurt" in a groggy evil sort of voice "well well look whose finally up. toook you quite awhile though" ric in shock jumps back and looks up
towars the figure sitting on a rock
"who the hell are you?" "oh my such a temper! your really pissed arent you?" gets down from the rock and breaks it and walks over toward ric
"i know everything about you kid so dont try anything stupid"

END of PART one

this pic was a bitch to draw!! i was using a laptop thingy for it and when i finished i know it looks like metal kitty's monster thing even though it has some simalaries it is not and yes i know i should make a few changes so it doesnt look like it
anywho i will and hope you enjoyed the little story
and i know its alittle fast
again this was done my those laptop's mouse things
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Comments: 14

Aldawolf [2009-08-22 06:10:15 +0000 UTC]

oh mugod dont eat him oh shier

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Poila-Invictiwerks [2009-05-17 03:59:01 +0000 UTC]

is it gonna be one of those RPG0inspired storylines/comics?

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GEEK-in-IT [2009-05-11 16:36:55 +0000 UTC]

Awesome story I like the picture too, especially the background

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ArchieTheArcticLion [2009-05-11 12:50:59 +0000 UTC]

Cool story so far dude

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Firoe [2009-05-10 16:43:52 +0000 UTC]

Great job bro!

Though I'm ashamed that I didn't really read the short story
Sorry 'bout that...

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Ryuakira [2009-05-09 07:36:06 +0000 UTC]

Wow Nice job bro ^^

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ricsaber123 In reply to Ryuakira [2009-05-09 15:25:14 +0000 UTC]

thanks bro

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Ryuakira In reply to ricsaber123 [2009-05-11 05:06:29 +0000 UTC]

Welcome ^^

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listix [2009-05-09 01:17:45 +0000 UTC]

Cool

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DracoRex1890 [2009-05-08 12:34:08 +0000 UTC]

epic

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TheGreatMatsutzu [2009-05-08 12:08:33 +0000 UTC]

Wow, that must have been difficult! Great work!

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wolfcub [2009-05-08 09:55:12 +0000 UTC]

love your shirt

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wolfpr [2009-05-08 02:48:10 +0000 UTC]

wow what a big furry ^^

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Farmboy13 [2009-05-08 01:47:37 +0000 UTC]

NICE!

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