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Rie--Rie — Kokoro and Eliot Dead or Alive 5 Poop 2

Published: 2012-12-29 06:00:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 2264; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 0
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Description I feel like the only one who loves this pairing. I:

Eliot, Kokoro - Dead or Alive 5 - Tecmo Koei, Team Ninja

Pic (c) ME.
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Comments: 8

Yuki-River [2012-12-29 20:28:13 +0000 UTC]

This is great, Rie Rie! I suppose my only criticism is that it's a bit dark, and that can lead to a misjudgment on my behalf on where is Kokoro's arm, where's Eliot's hand disappeared from?

I hope I am not causing an offence, and I truly admire what you are doing Rie Rie, and I trust that you are going to read a fanfiction of mine?

(Nah you don't have to, I would just love it if more criticism came in since it's my first.)

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Rie--Rie In reply to Yuki-River [2012-12-30 04:18:25 +0000 UTC]

The pic is cut off after Kokoro's arm, so his hand's not visible. xD

There would have been a bit more forearm if I went further. xD
Thank you though! I'll try to do more full body pictures. c:

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Yuki-River In reply to Rie--Rie [2012-12-30 15:40:25 +0000 UTC]

No problem!

Was my criticism good?

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Rie--Rie In reply to Yuki-River [2012-12-30 19:11:24 +0000 UTC]

Don't worry about it. You're fine.

Your criticism helps me fix the problem in the next ones, and that's what I aim for. c:

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Yuki-River In reply to Rie--Rie [2012-12-30 20:07:31 +0000 UTC]

Yay! :3

If I can't draw, I'll give feedback. Apparently, I'm quite good at it!

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axouel2009 [2012-12-29 11:13:20 +0000 UTC]

tat's very nice , I like it

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Rie--Rie In reply to axouel2009 [2012-12-29 16:53:26 +0000 UTC]

Aw thanks! C:

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axouel2009 In reply to Rie--Rie [2012-12-29 19:35:56 +0000 UTC]

no prob

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