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IrishMoonChild [2012-04-03 23:55:17 +0000 UTC]
Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
Over all I think the vision of the person in the kimono is very solid and there. My eyes were drawn to both the wearer's face and the kimono itself at first glance.
The left upper arm seems a little off, on the section just above her stomach, with the four tied bow on that side. When you compare it to the right, while the creases are right, the right arm is slightly too short. By raising the right arm up slightly or even down, and lengthening it a bit, it would even it out.
The only other thing I found would be to even out the sleeves at the kimono. While the stance, which is turned slightly to the side, would give an impression of one being shorter, it wouldn't be to that degree. One has a more rounded bottom, while the other has a flatter edge line. By changing this slightly, it would even it out more visually.
Other then those two things, I couldn't really find a problem. It has an almost serene look to the smile, which can be hard to capture, especially with line art. The flower is drawn with just enough detail so you can tell what it is. The hair seems very soft yet wavy. The rest of the kimono is shaped well, and defined without too much detail.
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Maiko-Girl [2012-08-10 00:25:22 +0000 UTC]
Again,i love it,i like the way you draw diffrent hairstyles too!
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IrishMoonChild [2012-04-03 23:55:57 +0000 UTC]
This line art looks lovely. ^^
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Rijio In reply to Jburns272 [2012-02-05 16:13:49 +0000 UTC]
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Amibar [2012-01-07 19:18:48 +0000 UTC]
can i color this art?
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Rijio In reply to Amibar [2012-01-07 19:20:52 +0000 UTC]
of course! i would be honored!
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Amibar In reply to Rijio [2012-01-07 19:35:10 +0000 UTC]
um did i hear you? wow,u said i could colour it? are u serious? omg thanks
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Amibar In reply to Rijio [2012-02-02 18:16:02 +0000 UTC]
yay!!!!!!!!
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Rijio In reply to Amibar [2012-02-03 12:46:50 +0000 UTC]
Thankies ^w^
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Amibar In reply to Rijio [2012-02-03 16:57:15 +0000 UTC]
no prblem
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Rijio In reply to Artnourd [2009-06-17 22:36:59 +0000 UTC]
yeah me too! but they are so hard to color >_<
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Rijio In reply to Artnourd [2009-06-28 02:13:21 +0000 UTC]
XD
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Sakutan [2009-06-07 00:57:42 +0000 UTC]
i really love this one too! =3
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Sakutan In reply to Rijio [2009-06-08 10:48:48 +0000 UTC]
i want to say Sakura, just because i like Sakura tree.
buuut in all actuality, probably the Momo. xD
i like how her hair isn't up, it remind me of a cross over
of traditional and current time.
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Karla-Chan In reply to Rijio [2009-04-07 12:01:36 +0000 UTC]
That's cool a good way to attract more people to your gallery though is to post more stuff, i have 100s of pictures in my gallery.
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Rijio In reply to Karla-Chan [2009-04-08 22:05:15 +0000 UTC]
I'd love and be really honored to see people coloring my work *u*
but I don't think it'll really interest someone to recolor it as I'm not very famous on deviant XD
but anyway if anyone passes by here and see this message feel free, just let me now when ur done lol XD
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Karla-Chan In reply to Rijio [2009-04-09 20:32:28 +0000 UTC]
I would post it in your artist comment when you post you line arts, but some people do like to colour things and i am sure you will get more famous soon. The more art you submit the more likely you are to get attention and clubs are a good way to get your art notised which is the trick on here to be honest.
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Rijio In reply to Karla-Chan [2009-04-14 12:26:36 +0000 UTC]
haha yeah! also I started getting more involved in the deviant world, like visit a lot more, faving, leaving comment etc... maybe this will also help ppl to know I exist down here XD
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mimikoyuy [2008-07-10 14:11:25 +0000 UTC]
Je suis prรฉssรฉ de voir le rรฉsultat^^
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