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Goodchildsbaby [2010-11-07 12:17:05 +0000 UTC]
inspired to write again, ty <3
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leonviana4 [2010-09-10 20:40:26 +0000 UTC]
I LOVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE the dbz yaoi ... well that could have a lemon in
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SAMBUS7 [2010-04-25 22:05:41 +0000 UTC]
I love it. The shading, the positioning, the sweat, the way goku seems to be leaning over staring directly at vegetas ass while vegeta looks pissed at losing.
Story: Goku and vegeta got into an argument over finding a dragonball that was in the desert. Fighting ensues, neither win because of the intense heat. Goku sits on the ground to avoid passing out from dehydration and vegeta stands in front of him on shaky legs, claiming victory.
Vegeta: "It appears Im the victor kakarott."
As he finishes his little gloating rant another heat wave blows by and vegeta collapses from heat exhaustion, landing in goku's lap.
Goku: "Hm, vegeta."
Vegeta: "Just shut up."
Again, I love the subtle gestures, it leaves more to the imagination.
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RinAvenue In reply to SAMBUS7 [2010-04-26 09:14:02 +0000 UTC]
I like the story you came up with! I can see that, and Vegeta insulting him with his usual 'weakling' type of response. And then of course after all that...the shut up just works. XD!
Thank you! I didn't really think of Goku looking there, but that makes it more amusing. <3 <3
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Deactived [2010-04-22 00:39:23 +0000 UTC]
Very well done. I like your style.
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V-lock [2010-04-19 23:02:23 +0000 UTC]
oh those two . . . @ 3@
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wanKt [2010-04-18 22:26:03 +0000 UTC]
lol, I imagine them just passing out from utter exhaustion after overexerting themselves training. Vegeta's just trying not to think about how he's fallen, or that Goku still has enough energy to sit up and maybe do other things... bwahaha.
I love your cell shading in this, it's godly.
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RinAvenue In reply to wanKt [2010-04-19 08:33:51 +0000 UTC]
Hehe, nice description! I can always count on you to just be awesome with describing something. <3 <3. It works too, cause with how I drew it, I can imagine Vegeta really just...laying on him. Just like, bleh. XD
Thanks! Cel shading is so hard. x_x
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wanKt In reply to RinAvenue [2010-04-19 15:56:32 +0000 UTC]
He'd totally pretend he didn't want it, but Goku would know better. ;D
I know, it's just, awkward sometimes, but the way you did the muscles, it's really amazing. <33
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RinAvenue In reply to wanKt [2010-04-19 22:48:34 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. I had started shading it like this ( [link] ) at first, but decided that the style didn't match my lines. I'm so glad that the cel-shading turned out decent enough! XD I liked how it came out before, but it just didn't look right together.
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wanKt In reply to RinAvenue [2010-04-19 23:19:21 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, this way really looks better.
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JaylByrd [2010-04-18 22:06:30 +0000 UTC]
I love Vegeta's expression xD
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XxChiChixX [2010-04-18 20:29:50 +0000 UTC]
I think Vegeta looks great in your style. I'm in love with the positions. Vegeta's just like...PLOP in Goku's lap. XD They really do look exhausted.
I really enjoy the subtly of the details and everything too - especially the textures in the ground. It looks so real!
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RinAvenue In reply to XxChiChixX [2010-04-19 07:16:43 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! Vegeta certainly is easier to draw in my style. Must be his perpetual frowny face...hehe.
<3<3!
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RinAvenue In reply to Shaish [2010-04-19 03:36:00 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! Yes. Mission success. So glad! <3
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Shaish In reply to RinAvenue [2010-04-19 04:28:02 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome. <3
8DD
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neechode [2010-04-18 16:45:48 +0000 UTC]
Loveloveloveloveloooooove!
As usual.
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RinAvenue In reply to cowcat44 [2010-04-19 07:18:46 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. It definitely got easier to draw them the more I did it...although I kinda need to go back to doing original stuff too XD. <3
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