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rinbowcrash1 — flutterdash part 4
Published: 2012-06-25 01:53:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 208; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Description last time on flutterdash fluttershy went on her first day of training and she did well only a few weeks till the race can fluttershy win or be a loser find out now!!
after 2 weeks og taining fluttershy got better and better each day!! until the race came up there was only 3 days of tainig left befor the race but fluttershy was ready
rainbow dash: hey fluttershy
fluttershy: oh hi there rainbow dash
rainbow dash taught her to speak loud and clear to ponies but that was the hardest part of training *cause fluttershy can t speak that well in front of ponies
rainbow dash: hey good luck see you at
cause all  the peguse was going to be there until the day of the race
flutter shy : ok rainbow i will train hard and practice my skills!!!
rainbow dash: great then see you in three days i guess
flutter shy : ok see you there to
........................................ the day of the race ...................................................................
fluttershy: ok you are the bomb ok you will when the race
rainbow dash went next to all the ponies that were the commpetres couches
everypony came to the race:
princess celestia had a choice since there is going to be unicorns and earth ponies
she had seats for the unicorns and earth ponies wile peaguse will sit on clouds * ok back to the race*
rarity , applejack, pinkie pie , and twilight came to see fluttershy
princees celestia , princess luna and princess cadence and shing armor were there to
princess celeatia : welcome to the royal flying race these peaguse will be flying in the race!!!!
EVERYPONY: YEAH WOO!!!!
clouds dale: rainstorm!!!!
pony ville: fluttershy
ponies from pony ville cheerred
princess celestia kept saying names
rarity: i cant belive that fluttershy is flying the race for ponyville
applejack: yeah and you can win a blue raibbon and a golden tropy
pinkie pie: yeah and dashie trained her to be a fast not low speak and cool powerful pony
twilight: yeah i know but i hope futtershy wins
coach: ok get in your pision
fluttershy: ok im going to be fast
rainstorm: ok fluttershy do your best
fluttershy: ok 0.o
coach: ok on your mark get ready GO!!!!!!!!!!!!
and the ponys race of
fluttershy knew that the ponys were fast she was in third place
twilight: fluttershy come on you can do it come on
pinkie pie: come on
rairty  grinding her teeth come on
apple jack: wat in tarnation is she  doing now
fluttershy: thats it i need to slow down
she slows down and let othere peaguses go ahead
rainbow dash: wat is she DONING FLUTTERSHY WAT ARE YOU DOING!!!!
fluttershy: you will see
coach: wat in equeatria is she duing
after a minute going slow the peaguse began to slow down
rainbow dash: oh i see wat she is doing
then next thing you knoew it she is 2nd place the peaguses in front of her was rainstorm and he was tired
fluttershy: nowlets finish this she went faster sand faster until she went past rainstrom then she went so fast that she left lighting smoke just like the wonder bolts
spit fire: wow she is fast
then she crossed the finish line
fluttershy: i did it i did it everypony was  cheering all og fluttershys friend
until spit fire came uo to her
spit fire: her fluttershy you were the best flyer i ever seen will you join the wonder bolts
fluttershy: saw rainbow dash get sad
sluttershy: yes but on one condotion
spit fire: yes wat
fluttershy: i want rainbow dash to join to
spitfire : really ok then
spit fire gave fluttershy two uniforms
rainbow dash was crying causeof fluttershyngoing to the wonder bolts
fluttershy: dashie
rainbow dash: wat
fluttershy: here me in you are in the wonder bolts the prize to you for coaching me
rainbow dash was stunnde then burst out in tears hugging here amd twilght and them joined them
fluttershy: this is the best day ever!!!!   tears of joy
rainbow dash: i know

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Comments: 3

5krunner97 [2012-06-26 17:26:43 +0000 UTC]

great job on this fan fic

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rinbowcrash1 In reply to 5krunner97 [2012-06-26 22:49:18 +0000 UTC]

thanks so much

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rinbowcrash1 [2012-06-25 01:53:25 +0000 UTC]

i mean part 5

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