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rinpana — Contest Entry - A Girl's Dream of Nature
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Published: 2014-05-31 10:12:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 1566; Favourites: 78; Downloads: 0
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Thank you uchuubranko for leaving a critique for this! dA is not featuring it (I didn't get the chance to put it as fair/unfair
) so please view it here uchuubranko.deviantart.com/cri… 
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Contest entry for this - fav.me/d7eav0m - organised by cicialexa
THERE'S SO MANY GOOD ARTISTS I DON'T KNOW IF I'LL WIN???
This was a perfect chance for me to practice backgrounds a.k.a nature (it was my frist time drawing pretty much all of this so it looks horrible bleugh)
sORRY FOR THE BLUE OVERFLOW AHAHAH
I hope you like it, any asks/comments/critiques are always welcomed
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Hello, here is the critique! Please reply if you have some other questions or disagree with something, I'll do my best! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l… " width="26" height="17" alt="
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First off, let me start with a WOAH WHAT A GORGEOUS BLUE! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/n/n… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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- One thing I would like to add is, that while the colours are ahwesome, it gets a bit intense for the eyes if I look for 15 minutes continuously. It's rather a suggestion related to preferences, but adding some more colours (such as purple-brown for the trees, orange for some flowers there and there?) will perhaps make it more captivating. Although it does have its own charm for such gorgeous blue! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l… " width="19" height="19" alt="
Forest
- The perspective is really really good! I like how they're fading in thin blue colour. The light source is mysterious and definitely a good touch!
- There is one colour I find it doesn't fit : the ...potion-ish green! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/x/x… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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Character
I must say her hair is gorgeously done! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l… " width="26" height="17" alt="
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- Position-wise : here are some things you might want to look out for! Her skirt folds and legs make us think she's about to stand. Perhaps the legs should go further inside the grass part to make her look more stable.
- The eyes : She looks a bit like she isn't looking at the bird, but in front of her. The eyes look forced, I suggest distancing and perhaps shaping them like (basically the \ line is the nose, the < are the eye outlines) :
( <\<) and not ( <\> )
Lastly, the birdie needs a bit more clarification, you could easily do that by detailing less the background surrounding it, adding shine to the bird, or lining it! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/l/l… " width="19" height="19" alt="
I hope this was helpful in a way or another! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/t/t… " width="15" height="15" alt="
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Happy arting, you have gorgeous pieces! e.deviantart.net/emoticons/d/d… " width="29" height="28" alt="
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Aah thank you so, so much for the critique! I could not express how helpful it was!! 
I will be sure to keep this critique in mind next time I do these kinds of deviations. ^_^
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I love how she almost seems like a stained-glass window.
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Ooh I never thought of that! It actually kinda does now that I see it again
Thanks for leaving a comment!
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It's a really beautiful piece, so thanks for sharing ;D
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It's kinda hard to see. I suggest you increase the contrast in the future
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She kinda blends with the background, which makes her hard to see
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Ooh right! Yes, it was my intention of her blending her in with the colors of the backgrounds (making her out of place is worse). Sorry it's hard for her to see (assuming you're talking about Lilly). Thank you for your comment though!
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Ahh I see now. And you're welcome!
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I love blue color
But it's hard to see that the she have a little bird.
But all of that is Awesome > < !!!!!
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Aah thank you very much!! >///<
Hehe I have to agree too, I guess I should've picked another color
Thank you for liking it though, appreciate it!
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Thank you for entering its so vibrant and the shading is AWESOME!!!
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Wow, this looks incredible! Everything is so vivid, and I love the dappling effect.
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