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Ririkou-Adopts In reply to Artha-Demon [2013-09-20 04:18:11 +0000 UTC]
heehee~
now I would be really interested in knowing what ideas that are XD
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Artha-Demon In reply to Ririkou-Adopts [2013-09-20 04:32:29 +0000 UTC]
The idea so far: In my story, the god known to many as simply God (The Christian god; yeah, in my stories he's the bad guy) was actually a cruel, vicious, and power-mad Primal (First Gen deity, born soon after the Big Bang, and the predecessors of all current deities of all worlds. There were thousands of them and now there are merely hundreds).
He played with mortals like toys; and enslaved an entire race of Celestials (The Angels). Once enslaved, he broke them and forced them to follow his will. They were powerless against a god, even when a third of their population rose up against him for their freedom.
The ringleader of the rebels was thrown to the Mortal World, along with his followers, as an example to any who would dare try to fight again. (Yup - Lucifer)
His name was changed, to Satan, the Adversary. And all things bad were blamed on him. The cruel god used him and his followers to increase his own power, by cursing them to live in the shadows; for all evil of the world to be blamed on them.
Broken and frusterated, these deposed angels went into hiding; wanting to gain the strength to rise up once again, and free their people from the cruel and vicious god.
That is a part of where this one comes in; a timid and quiet Celestial, he tried to fight against Yahweh soon after the revolt. He, and several other angels were castrated, and chained to the cruel god's throne.
He cursed them to be able to utter nothing but worship and praise to stroke his own ego, and if they tried to fight they were hurt. That is how he lost his wings. He kept trying to fight back, and eventually half of his wing was ripped off, leaving one wing, and one wing that was a bloody stump of feathers.
Long story short, my character Kraeos, the God of Freedom, heard of this. Saved the god's demigod son (Jeshuea or Jesus) who was not so dead as people thought he was (comatose for three days until Kraeos ran off with the Demigod)
Of course, the cruel god meant to have Jeshuea killed because he had not turned out as he wanted him. Instead, he had the enslaved angels seed into people's mind that it was a blood sacrifice to appease his anger - thus making himself seem like a benefactor who "sacrificed his only son" for the mortals. It worked. More and more people started succumbing to his control; Wars broke out, men killing men, and blood was spilled as Yahweh sat back and watched it all.
It could only last so long, though - Because soon, with the help of Jeshuea, Kraeos knew the god's weakness.
He rescued several goddesses and their offspring - all sired by Yahweh to increase his own power.
As he expected, yahweh came tearing in to attack him - to kill his rebellious son (Jeshuea) and drain the six divine children of their life force to increase his own.
While 4 of these newlings were killed, two survived ( Kai (Lord of the Forest) and Sariel (Lady of Hope) to be raised alongside his own son ( Alaeos, Lord of Life).
Once Yahweh was defeated and killed, his Center was taken and purified; and Kraeos went to clean up the mess left over from the god's long, cruel rule.
He took the angels back with him to his own realm. He granted them their freedom; but many were so broken that they no longer knew what it meant.
This is one of them; so broken he had no free will left. With a lot of gentle guidance and help, he slowly comes out of his shell. He remains as one of Kraeos' messengers; He knows nothing other then servitude.
I'll work more on his story if I win him x3
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Ririkou-Adopts In reply to Artha-Demon [2013-09-20 04:43:01 +0000 UTC]
OAO
this is really great... I don't even know what to say ...
forgive me
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Khoneadopts [2013-09-18 01:34:35 +0000 UTC]
He's awesome and so sexy *nosebleed*
Keep up the good work!!
I would love to buy him and draw him at least once but I'm broke... I'm sorry... sobs
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Khoneadopts In reply to Ririkou-Adopts [2013-09-19 01:39:02 +0000 UTC]
;A; Thank you! I still need to develop a style though
And Don't worry! Your adoptables are beautiful and I can see all the effort you put into them! Maybe you just need some more exposure c:
Thank you! You're soo generous!! I still hope someone bids on this beauty c: He's so perf
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Superhglg [2013-09-17 22:58:58 +0000 UTC]
He looks so cool <3
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Ririkou-Adopts In reply to Superhglg [2013-09-17 23:00:22 +0000 UTC]
haha~
thankyuuuu~
damn... you were even fater in writing a comment than me writing the "BID HERE"... I'm just too slow.. TTATT
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Superhglg In reply to Ririkou-Adopts [2013-09-17 23:19:49 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome and pft... I'm just fast. Don't worry XD
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